From e214b559a4a182db874f6635b6c53bb213955a07 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: SuperValou96 <32134811+SuperValou96@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 13 Aug 2018 22:18:13 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] spelling and grammar Better? --- .../src/data/hobbies.data.ts | 66 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 33 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-) diff --git a/angular/site-perso-corentin/src/data/hobbies.data.ts b/angular/site-perso-corentin/src/data/hobbies.data.ts index f13a802c..9f223b5b 100644 --- a/angular/site-perso-corentin/src/data/hobbies.data.ts +++ b/angular/site-perso-corentin/src/data/hobbies.data.ts @@ -6,22 +6,22 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ new Hobby( 'Running', 'running', - 'I run on average twice a week. I started in 2012 because it is healthy but I still practising because I like it. ' + - 'Even when I came to the engineering school and I stopped almost every sports because of the community life. ' + - 'I continued to run once a week. It ables me to empty my mind and to stay fit. Recently I started to participated to some races ' + + 'I run on average twice a week. I started in 2012 because it is healthy and I kept practising because I like it. ' + + 'Even when I came to engineering school and stopped almost all my sports because of the community life. ' + + 'I continued to run once a week. It allows me to clear my mind and keep fit. Recently I started to participate in races ' + 'with friends and I will continue.', [ new Image( 'La Sainté Lyon', - 'La Sainté Lyon is a mythical race which begins at Saint-Etienne and leads to Lyon. ' + - 'It is a race which starts at midnight and is 80 km long with 2100m of elevation gain and 2400m of elevation loss. ' + - 'In 2017 I ran it in relay with three other friends. I did the 21 last kilometers. In 2018 I will try to the full one.', + 'La Sainté Lyon is a mythical race which begins at Saint-Étienne and leads to Lyon. ' + + 'It is a race which starts at midnight and is 80 km long with 2,100m of elevation gain and 2,400m of elevation loss. ' + + 'In 2017 I ran it in relay with three other friends. I did the 21 last kilometers. In 2018 I will try the full one.', 'saintelyon.jpg', true ), new Image( 'Gouffre d\'Enfer dam', - 'Saint-Étienne is next to the regional park of "Le Pilat", it is there I mostly run. ' + + 'Saint-Étienne is next to the regional park of "Le Pilat", it is where I mostly run. ' + 'It is a green mountain with lot of trails. One of them leads to the dam of the above picture. ' + 'The landscape is amazing and it is quite resourcing to run there.', 'running2.jpg', @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ ), new Image( 'Les Deux Alpes Snow Trail', - 'Last winter I participated to the Snow Trail of Les Deux Alpes ski station. ' + + 'Last winter I participated in the Snow Trail of Les Deux Alpes ski station. ' + 'It is a 20km Trail with 700m of elevation gain. I was running in deep snow, in the dark, in a blizzard. ' + 'It was a very good experience and I will probably do it again this year.', 'snow-trail.jpg', @@ -40,20 +40,20 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ new Hobby( 'Climbing', 'climbing', - 'I climb on average once a week. I started in 2009 thank to my uncle who is a climbing teacher and ' + + 'I climb on average once a week. I started in 2009 thanks to my uncle who is a climbing teacher and ' + 'it became the first sport I truly liked. ' + 'I liked it so much that I integrated my county team and started to practise four times a week. ' + - 'I did some competitions but I prefer practising it for the pleasure.

' + - 'It is a very complete sport which train lot of muscle and keep me fit and healthy. ' + - 'I love climbing because there are many ways to climb, technique could compensate strength. ' + - 'Moreover climbing could be practised indoor and outdoor on infinite among of routes. ' + + 'I did some competitions but I prefer practising for my own pleasure.

' + + 'It is a very complete sport which involves a lot of muscle and keeps me fit and healthy. ' + + 'I love climbing because there are many ways to climb, technique could compensate for strength. ' + + 'Moreover climbing could be practised indoor and outdoor on infinite amount of routes. ' + 'Furthermore climbing is no longer dangerous with contemporary safety tools and techniques.

' + - 'I stopped climbing for 2 years when I came to the engineering school because of the community life. ' + + 'I stopped climbing for 2 years when I came to engineering school because of the community life. ' + 'But I restarted to climb in June 2018 during my internship in Netherlands and I will continue.', [ new Image( 'Neoliet Bolder Rotterdam', - 'During my internship at Rotterdam I climbed in a bolder house names Neoliet. ' + + 'During my internship at Rotterdam I climbed in a bolder house named Neoliet. ' + 'Bolder are short sequences of hard movements. It is practised without rope, there are huge mattress to cushion the falls. ' + 'It is the best way to train because it develops strength and stamina.', 'neoliet.jpg', @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ ), new Image( 'My climbing room at Auxerre', - 'I started climbing in this room in my town (Auxerre). It is a 12 meters high wall with lot of routes. ' + + 'I started climbing in this gym in my town (Auxerre). It is a 12 meters high wall with a lot of routes. ' + 'Ropes and harness are needed to climb safely.', 'saeauxerre.gif', true @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ 'Le Saussois', 'This is the nearest cliff from my parent\'s home. It is a famous climbing spot in France. ' + 'When the weather was fine, I used to climb there on weekend. This picture was taken during an outdoor challenge. ' + - 'One of the activities was this huge jump between the two cliff, it was awesome.', + 'One of the activities was this huge jump between the two cliffs, it was awesome.', 'saussois.jpg', true ) @@ -80,9 +80,9 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ 'Skiing', 'skiing', 'I ski at least twice a year. ' + - 'I ski since I was a kid thank to my father who love skiing too and who have a little flat in the Alpes. ' + + 'I ski since I was a kid thanks to my father who loves skiing too and who has a little flat in the Alpes. ' + 'I took courses when I was young but I quickly stopped because I prefer skiing without following a teacher. ' + - 'I have my own equipment with two pair of ski, one for slopes and the other to freeride.', + 'I have my own equipment with two pair of skis, one for slopes and the other for freeriding.', [ new Image( 'video', @@ -93,14 +93,14 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ new Image( 'video', 'In 2018 I was treasurer of the ski association of the school. We organized a week at Val d\'Allos for 70 students. ' + - 'This the aftermovie of the week.', + 'This is the aftermovie of the week.', 'https://www.youtube.com/embed/aohSbZc53NM', true ), new Image( 'Mont Blanc at Praz-sur-Arly', - 'The apartment of my father is in the little ski station of Praz-sur-Arly. I go there once a year. ' + - 'The ski area has a vue on the Mont Blanc which is in background of this picture took in 2018.', + 'My father\'s apartment is in the little ski station of Praz-sur-Arly. I go there once a year. ' + + 'The ski area has a vue on the Mont Blanc which is in background of this picture taken in 2018.', 'praz2018montblanc.jpg', true ) @@ -111,27 +111,27 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ 'cooking', 'I enjoy cooking. Even when I cook for myself I try to do something tasty and it does not bother me to spend time on it. ' + 'But I also like cooking for other. I often organize some meals with friends. ' + - 'Moreover at the engineering school I became the president of the Associflard. ' + - 'It is a student association which organize some meals for students but also other pioneering events about food. ', + 'Moreover in engineering school I became president of the Associflard. ' + + 'It is a student association which organizes some meals for students but also other pioneering events about food. ', [ new Image( 'Barbecue Students-Teachers', - 'Once a year, the Associflard organize a barbecue for both students and teachers of the Écolde des mines de Saint-Étienne. ' + - 'It is a friendly moment where these two groups could exchange, gathered by the food.', + 'Once a year, the Associflard organizes a barbecue for both students and teachers of École des Mines de Saint-Étienne. ' + + 'It is a friendly moment where these two groups can exchange, gathered by the food.', 'bbq-permanenteleve2018.jpg', true ), new Image( 'Culinary Hike', 'One of the best event of the Associflard is the culinary hike. It is a hike of around 6 km in the regional park of "Le Pilat". ' + - 'This hike start with an aperitif and continue with several stop to take the starter, the dish and the dessert.
' + - 'What is most beautiful than walking in wonderful landscape and eating good food ?', + 'This hike starts with an aperitif and continues with several stops to have starter, dish and dessert.
' + + 'What is more beautiful than walking in wonderful landscape and eating good food?', 'marchegourmande.jpg', true ), new Image( 'Floor Meal', - 'In the student house of the engineering school, we were grouped by floor. ' + + 'In the engineering school\'s student house, we were grouped by floor. ' + 'We often organize some meals with all the friends of the floor.', 'repasetage.jpeg', true @@ -141,14 +141,14 @@ export const HOBBIES: Hobby[] = [ new Hobby( 'Crafting', 'crafting', - 'I have always been a manual guy. I like do the thing by myself. So when I need something I craft it. ' + - 'Since I was a kid I love being in my grandfather workshop using tools. ' + + 'I have always been a manual guy. I like do the things by myself. So when I need something I craft it. ' + + 'Since I am a kid I love being in my grandfather\'s workshop using tools. ' + 'Naturally since I left home I have my own tools and I continue to craft and repair things around me. ' + - 'At the student house of the engineering school I was the guy people will meet when they need to craft something.', + 'At the engineering school\'s student house I was the guy people would meet when they needed to craft something.', [ new Image( 'Circle bar', - 'As vice-president of the student office I participated to the organization of parties. ' + + 'As Vice-President of the student office I participated in the organization of parties. ' + 'For our bars we had only regular rectangular tables and for a party we needed a circular one. So I crafted it with broken tables.', 'circlebar.jpg', true