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 ## Overview
 
-Apple released security updates to address vulnerabilities in Safari, iOS, iPadOS, macOS, watchOS, tvOS, and visionOS. A cyber threat actor could exploit some of these vulnerabilities to take control of an affected system. WA SOC encourages users and administrators to review the advisories and apply necessary updates.
+Apple has released security updates to address vulnerabilities in multiple products. A cyber threat actor could exploit some of these vulnerabilities to take control of an affected system. WA SOC encourages users and administrators to review the advisories and apply necessary updates.
 
 ## What is vulnerable?
 
 | Product(s) Affected          | Version(s)                 | CVE                                                      |
 | ---------------------------- | -------------------------- | -------------------------------------------------------- |
-| Safari 17.6                  | all versions before 17.6   | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214121) |
-| iOS 17.6 and iPadOS 17.6     | all versions before 17.6   | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214117) |
-| iOS 16.7.9 and iPadOS 16.7.9 | all versions before 16.7.9 | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214116) |
-| macOS Sonoma 14.6            | all versions before 14.6   | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214119) |
-| macOS Ventura 13.6.8         | all versions before 13.6.8 | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214120) |
-| macOS Monterey 12.7.6        | all versions before        | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214118) |
-| watchOS 10.6                 | all versions before 10.6   | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214124) |
-| tvOS 17.6                    | all versions before 17.6   | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214122) |
-| visionOS 1.3                 | all versions before 1.3    | [List of CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214123) |
+| Safari 17.6                  | all versions before 17.6   | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214121) |
+| iOS 17.6 and iPadOS 17.6     | all versions before 17.6   | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214117) |
+| iOS 16.7.9 and iPadOS 16.7.9 | all versions before 16.7.9 | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214116) |
+| macOS Sonoma 14.6            | all versions before 14.6   | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214119) |
+| macOS Ventura 13.6.8         | all versions before 13.6.8 | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214120) |
+| macOS Monterey 12.7.6        | all versions before        | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214118) |
+| watchOS 10.6                 | all versions before 10.6   | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214124) |
+| tvOS 17.6                    | all versions before 17.6   | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214122) |
+| visionOS 1.3                 | all versions before 1.3    | [Vendor listed CVEs](https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT214123) |
 
 ## Recommendation
 
 The WA SOC recommends administrators apply the solutions as per vendor instructions to all affected devices within expected timeframe of *1 month* (refer [Patch Management](../guidelines/patch-management.md)):
 
-- Apple: <https://support.apple.com/en-gb/HT201222>
+- Apple security releases: <https://support.apple.com/en-gb/HT201222>
 
 ## Reference
 
-- CISA: <https://www.cisa.gov/news-events/alerts/2024/07/30/apple-releases-security-updates-multiple-products>
+- CISA article: <https://www.cisa.gov/news-events/alerts/2024/07/30/apple-releases-security-updates-multiple-products>