[Suggestion] Improve dialogue for Ink!Sans #9
Description
While it is not required to do so. I kindly ask if you can improve the English Dialogue for ink sans. By improving it, I mean many things. For example, during the beginning, you could make the dialogue more detailed by doing this...
Before:
I have seen all the things you have done.
You destroyed all AUs with no mercy.
You will die here soon, I promise.
After:
So, here we are. Face to face…
I have seen all the things that you’ve done.
Needless to say, you’ve erased all the AUs recklessly.
But your reign of terror will end soon, and I promise.
Another example is before Fresh Sans, you could make it so that the following sentences after the phrase: "You are not brave" could stick to it's meaning, instead of ink telling you that you are a failure afterwards...
Before:
You are not brave.
You always skip over the obstacles and head for the "goal".
But you never think about anyone else.
You are a failure.
After:
You don’t show BRAVERY.
You always head for the so-called… “goal”.
But you never face the obstacles.
You always skip them, rather than enduring.
During the battle, I've noticed that the battle focuses mainly on gameplay. So it's good to step out of the gameplay zone every once in a while, just like what you did with the Sanses that came after the Saness attack. (More detailed faces than the rest.)
I also noticed that the native language of this game is Japanese, which is a possible reason why the English version has a mediocre-tier dialogue.
If you want, I could list my version of the dialogue, but then again, these are just suggestions. You do not have to change them. Some people just like battles with detailed dialogue. Again, this is just a kind request, you do not have to take this to offense.
Please, and thank you.