Specalist (English Minipatch) (#752)

ReginaeSpence · web-flow · commit f5f9e1a43182 · 2024-12-15T20:38:40.000+01:00
diff --git a/Resources/Locale/en-US/_Nuclear14/Special/character-examine.ftl b/Resources/Locale/en-US/_Nuclear14/Special/character-examine.ftl
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 special-appearance-component-examine-charisma-very-low = { CAPITALIZE(SUBJECT($user)) } seems repulsive.
 special-appearance-component-examine-charisma-low = { CAPITALIZE(SUBJECT($user)) } seems awkward.
 special-appearance-component-examine-charisma-medium = { CAPITALIZE(SUBJECT($user)) } seems normal.
-special-appearance-component-examine-charisma-high = { CAPITALIZE(SUBJECT($user)) } seem approachable.
+special-appearance-component-examine-charisma-high = { CAPITALIZE(SUBJECT($user)) } seems approachable.
 special-appearance-component-examine-charisma-very-high = { CAPITALIZE(SUBJECT($user)) } seems suave.
 
 # Examine all special modifiers
diff --git a/Resources/Locale/en-US/_Nuclear14/job-names.ftl b/Resources/Locale/en-US/_Nuclear14/job-names.ftl
@@ -28,17 +28,17 @@ job-description-caravan-leader = Coordinate the caravan company in the area and
 job-name-caravan-trader = Caravan Trader
 job-description-caravan-trader = Conduct trade missions and travel caravan routes to generate profit for the company.
 job-name-caravan-guard = Caravan Guard
-job-description-caravan-guard = Protect the caravan company traders, their livestock and their inventory.
+job-description-caravan-guard = Protect the caravan company traders, their livestock, and their inventory.
 
 # NCR
 job-name-ncr-cadet = NCR Cadet
-job-description-ncr-cadet = Show your officers that youre ready to become a private of the NCR army.
+job-description-ncr-cadet = Prove to the officers that you're ready to become a soldier of the NCR army.
 job-name-ncr-medic = NCR Medic
-job-description-ncr-medic = Treat the troopers and offer services to the wasteland people.
+job-description-ncr-medic = Treat the troops and offer services to the wasteland people.
 job-name-ncr-sgt = NCR Sergeant
-job-description-ncr-sgt = A non-commissioned officer in the NCR military. Lead a squad to protect the NCRs interests in the region.
+job-description-ncr-sgt = A non-commissioned officer in the NCR military. Lead a squad to protect the NCR interests in the region.
 job-name-ncr-lt = NCR Lieutenant
-job-description-ncr-lt = The local leader of the NCR military. Fulfil your missions by coordinating your military forces in the area. Organise your Sergeants.
+job-description-ncr-lt = The local leader of the NCR military. Fulfill your mission by coordinating your military forces in the area. Organise your Sergeants.
 job-name-ncr-soldier = NCR Soldier
 job-description-ncr-soldier = The backbone of any military. Soldiers get stuff done and follow a Sergeant on missions.
 job-name-ncr-engineer = NCR Engineer
@@ -72,13 +72,13 @@ job-description-tribal-healer = Produce medicines and compounds for the tribe, a
 
 # Vault
 job-name-overseer = Vault Overseer
-job-description-overseer = Follow Vault Tec's objectives in managing your Vault and ensure everything goes to plan...
+job-description-overseer = Follow Vault-Tec's objectives in managing your Vault and ensure everything goes to plan...
 job-name-vault-doctor = Vault Doctor
 job-description-vault-doctor = Maintain the health and well-being of your fellow Vault Dwellers. Conduct research where necessary.
 job-name-vault-dweller = Vault Dweller
-job-description-vault-dweller = The general populous of the Vault. Live a comfortable life and pull your own weight where necessary.
+job-description-vault-dweller = The general populace of the Vault. Live a comfortable life and pull your own weight where necessary.
 job-name-vault-engineer = Vault Engineer
-job-description-vault-engineer = Maintain the Vault and all it's vital systems to ensure a comfortable and safe life.
+job-description-vault-engineer = Maintain the Vault and all its vital systems to ensure a comfortable and safe life.
 job-name-vault-security = Vault Security
 job-description-vault-security = Keep order within the Vault and report to the Overseer. For the good of the Vault!
 
@@ -94,23 +94,23 @@ job-description-wastelander = Survive in the wasteland and carve out your own pa
 
 # Town
 job-name-townsperson = Townsperson
-job-description-townsperson = A member of the new world society. Follow the town rules or try run for Mayor to change them.
+job-description-townsperson = A member of the post-war society. Follow the town rules or try run for Mayor to change them.
 job-name-towndoctor = Town Doctor
 job-description-towndoctor = Sell your medical knowledge as a service. Treat the injured for money and manage a doctors practice in town.
 job-name-townmechanic = Town Mechanic
 job-description-townmechanic = Maintain the towns services and infrastructure and do what you can on the side for others for money.
 job-name-townshopkeeper = Town Shopkeeper
-job-description-townshopkeeper = Setup shop in town, organise trade partnerships and sell your wares to the wanderes of the wastes. Beware the tax man.
+job-description-townshopkeeper = Setup shop in town, organise trade partnerships, and sell your wares to the wanderers of the wastes. Beware the tax man.
 job-name-towndeputy = Town Deputy
 job-description-towndeputy = Deputy peacekeeper for the town. Keep the peace and provide backup to your Sheriff.
 job-name-townsheriff = Town Sheriff
 job-description-townsheriff = Maintain law and order within the town and support the Mayor in their rule.
 job-name-townmayor = Town Mayor
 job-description-townmayor = Maintain civilisation in the town. Set taxes and laws and try not to be thrown out or taken over.
 job-name-townreporter = Town Reporter
-job-description-townreporter = Interview people and spread the news across the region, or just have a talk show!
+job-description-townreporter = Interview people, spread the news across the region, or just have a talk show!
 job-name-townbartender = Town Innkeeper
-job-description-townbartender = Manage the local bar, kitchen and rooms that are there for renting. Run a business in town!
+job-description-townbartender = Manage the local bar, kitchen, and rooms that are there for renting. Run a business in town!
 
 # Followers
 job-name-followers = Followers of the Apocalypse
diff --git a/Resources/Prototypes/_Nuclear14/Entities/Objects/Consumable/Drinks/drinks_bottles.yml b/Resources/Prototypes/_Nuclear14/Entities/Objects/Consumable/Drinks/drinks_bottles.yml
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
 - type: entity
   parent: DrinkBottleBaseFull50
   id: N14DrinkIrradiatedNukaColaBottleFull
-  name: irratiated Nuka Cola bottle
+  name: irradiated Nuka Cola bottle
   description: An unrefreshing beverage that has a extremely sugary taste. The aftertaste is bitter and burnt.
   components:
   - type: SolutionContainerManager
diff --git a/Resources/ServerInfo/_Nuclear14/Guidebooks/Factions/factions.xml b/Resources/ServerInfo/_Nuclear14/Guidebooks/Factions/factions.xml
@@ -17,20 +17,20 @@ The Tribes of the local area have an important part to play in keeping the local
 Be it traditional or forward thinking, passive or aggressive, isolationist or ready to join the city and engage in trade.
 
 ## The Vault
-The local Vault remains largely unfamiliar to the surface dwellers, just as the surface is also largely unknown to those within the Vault. The location of the Vault mostly lost to time. This underground sanctuary is lead by the Overseer who unbeknown to the Dwellers, may have an objective or experiment to carry out.
+The local Vault remains largely unfamiliar to the surface dwellers, just as the surface is also largely secreted away to those within the Vault. The location of the Vault mostly lost to time. This underground sanctuary is lead by the Overseer who, unbeknownst to the Dwellers, may have an objective or experiment to carry out.
 
 ## Caravan Company
-The Blue Line Co. is the main source of new resources and equipment in this region of the Wasteland. They have the supply lines setup to trade long distances which is especially useful once the local resources start to dry up. The company itself originates from Canada, but they still accept bottlecaps and NCR dollars because their caravans trade far and wide.
+The Blue Line Co. is the main source of new resources and equipment in this region of the Wasteland. They have the supply lines set up to trade long distances which is especially useful once the local resources start to dry up. The company itself originates from Canada, but they still accept bottlecaps and NCR dollars because their caravans trade far and wide.
 If the local Blue Line station is lost or destroyed, the railway station will very likely cease to function.
 
 ## Midwestern Brotherhood
-The Midwestern Brotherhood of Steel are another splinter organisation from the original Brotherhood of Steel. This land is not their home, they're here on a mission to investigate the rumors about this region's vast supplies of advanced technologies and gather intelligence on the new Washington chapter of the Brotherhood.
+The Midwestern Brotherhood of Steel are another splinter organisation from the original Brotherhood of Steel. This land is not their home, but they're here on a mission to investigate the rumors about this region's vast supplies of advanced technologies and gather intelligence on the new Washington chapter of the Brotherhood.
 
 About 80 years ago, they departed from Lost Hills and established a feudal empire in their new territories. They are open to sharing its technology with their subjects if it also serves their interests. Recruiting tribals and training them is a common occurance back home, but should they continue doing that this far away? Should they trust the locals here?
 
-### Washington Brotherhood
+## Washington Brotherhood
 The Washington Brotherhood of Steel is a new and rising power within this region. They self-exiled from Lost Hills just a few years back. The intention of their Elder is finding the truth to the legends surrounding various advanced technologies of the former Washington state. They are an isolationist military dictatorship and came here with the intent to grow in strength while hiding in the shadows.
 
-Their senior members sense that a storm is coming that could wipe out the entire Brotherhood - maybe humankind - and because of this they are not afraid of utalizing more dangerous & extreme technologies, knowledge that other chapters' Elders would advise to destroy. Due to this radical ideology of theirs they are no longer welcome back at Lost Hills.
+Their senior members sense that a storm is coming that could wipe out the entire Brotherhood - maybe humankind - and because of this they are not afraid of utilizing more dangerous & extreme technologies, knowledge that other chapters' Elders would advise to destroy. Due to this radical ideology of theirs they are no longer welcome back at Lost Hills.
 
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