diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/introduction.mdx b/packages/docs/pages/introduction.mdx index c27293a7..d068b747 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/introduction.mdx +++ b/packages/docs/pages/introduction.mdx @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ Here are some useful tips for reading this book: - Comments start with `#`: -`# this is a comment make sure you read them!` +`# this is a comment. Make sure you read them!` - Sample outputs start with an arrow: @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ Here are some useful tips for reading this book: - User-defined inputs are in angle brackets: -`$ this is a command you should run ` +`this is a command you should run ""` ## About this documentation diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/introduction/install/source.mdx b/packages/docs/pages/introduction/install/source.mdx index d44b40a6..4f3d587e 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/introduction/install/source.mdx +++ b/packages/docs/pages/introduction/install/source.mdx @@ -3,15 +3,15 @@ import { Callout } from 'nextra-theme-docs' # Install from source -Please note that, although installing from source is the recommended route for installing namada, it can prove to be difficult, and is not recommended for beginners. For a first time installation, the installation process can take up to an hour. Building binaries from source can also take a long time, depending on your machine. +Please note that, although installing from source is the recommended route for installing namada, it can prove to be difficult, and is not recommended for beginners. For a first time installation, the installation process can take up to an hour. Building binaries from source can also take a long time, depending on the machine. ## Pre-requisites -Make sure you have the correct [pre-requisites](./source/pre-requisites.mdx) downloaded and installed. +Ensure the correct [pre-requisites](./source/pre-requisites.mdx) have been downloaded and installed. ## Installing Namada -Now that you have all the required dependencies installed, you can clone the source code from the [Namada repository](https://github.com/anoma/namada) and build it with: +Once all the required dependencies have been installed, the next step is to clone the source code from the [Namada repository](https://github.com/anoma/namada) and build it with: ```shell copy git clone https://github.com/anoma/namada.git diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/networks/testnets/genesis-validator-apply.mdx b/packages/docs/pages/networks/testnets/genesis-validator-apply.mdx index 0d6b1ac5..e9a704ed 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/networks/testnets/genesis-validator-apply.mdx +++ b/packages/docs/pages/networks/testnets/genesis-validator-apply.mdx @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Before a testnet launches, you can apply to be a genesis validator. ### Set up -Follow [this guide](../../operators/validators/validator-setup.mdx#pre-genesis) on how to generate your "pre-genesis" validator files. +Follow [this guide](../../operators/validators/validator-setup.mdx#pre-genesis) on how to generate "pre-genesis" validator files. For the shielded expedition, the `balances.toml` file has been published at the [namada-shieled-expedition repository](https://github.com/anoma/namada-shielded-expedition). diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/genesis-flow/participants.mdx b/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/genesis-flow/participants.mdx index e659dc31..ecdde19b 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/genesis-flow/participants.mdx +++ b/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/genesis-flow/participants.mdx @@ -196,7 +196,11 @@ Validator account address: tnam1q8lsztqqhpjxdwzw88mqqc2mun7dvpxvas3v2dxk #### Bond to a pre-genesis validator account If your public key has been allocated `NAM` (`NAAN` for the shielded expedition), you can bond to a genesis validator as a pre-genesis transaction. -Please follow the below steps: + +This step is intended for pre-genesis participants who have been allocated `NAM` (`NAAN` for the shielded expedition) and want to bond to a genesis validator that is not their own. If you want to bond to your own genesis validator, please follow the steps in [Generate a pre-genesis validator account](#generate-a-pre-genesis-validator-account) and use the `--self-bond` arguments. + + +The bond can be achieved by running: ```bash copy namadac utils genesis-bond \ @@ -206,7 +210,7 @@ namadac utils genesis-bond \ --path "" ``` -After this step is completed, sign the transaction +After this step is completed, it is required to sign the transaction. ### Signing transactions diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/local-network.mdx b/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/local-network.mdx index 181dfb62..0b11d2eb 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/local-network.mdx +++ b/packages/docs/pages/operators/networks/local-network.mdx @@ -77,6 +77,6 @@ The ledger can be run through the familiar command: After the local network has fulfilled its purpose, it can be cleaned up by running the following commands found in the cleanup function of the script: ```shell copy - kilalll namadan + killall namadan # delete the base_dir/chain_id directory ``` diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/_meta.json b/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/_meta.json index 3752b941..31af00dc 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/_meta.json +++ b/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/_meta.json @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ { "electing": "Becoming a Steward", "voting": "Voting for Stewards and PGF proposals", - "proposing": "PGF proposals (Stewards only)" + "proposing": "PGF proposals" } diff --git a/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/proposing.mdx b/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/proposing.mdx index 0f5120be..6ad8dee2 100644 --- a/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/proposing.mdx +++ b/packages/docs/pages/users/public-goods-stewards/proposing.mdx @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ import { Callout } from 'nextra-theme-docs' ## Formatting the `proposal.json` -Below is an example of a `PGFProposal` that a steward could submit. Note that only stewards will be able to submit these proposals. +Below is an example of a `PGFProposal` that a governance participant could submit. ```json { "proposal" :{ @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Save this file as `PGF_proposal.json` to some memorable path on your machine. ## Submitting the proposal -In order to submit the proposal, the steward can use the following command: +In order to submit the proposal, the governance participant can use the following command: ```shell copy namada client init-proposal \