From f9aca080f1eaa74591f13e22204b1742dcaa9d50 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Chris Newton <me@chrisnewtn.com>
Date: Sat, 2 Mar 2024 22:24:41 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] chore: improve the wording of the about page

Well, I think it's an improvement. I'm not a writer.
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 pages/index.html | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/pages/index.html b/pages/index.html
index 82aa64d..165cb28 100644
--- a/pages/index.html
+++ b/pages/index.html
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ <h1 class="logo">Chris Newton</h1>
     <article>
       <h1>About</h1>
       <p>Hi I'm Chris. I'm a software developer based in Brighton. My pronouns are he/him. Welcome to my website.</p>
-      <p>I'm mainly a JavaScript developer. Node.js and the browser. It's been my <a rel="me" href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/chrisnewtn/">career</a> for well over a decade at this point. I've seen things you wouldn't believe, etc.</p>
+      <p>My focus is JavaScript, whether Node.js or the browser. It's been my <a rel="me" href="https://www.linkedin.com/in/chrisnewtn/">career</a> for well over a decade at this point. I've seen things you wouldn't believe, etc.</p>
       <p>This site is hosted using <a href="https://pages.github.com/">GitHub Pages</a>. The DNS is handled by <a href="https://gandi.net">Gandi</a>. I don't set any cookies or monitor any traffic.</p>
-      <p>I'm writing the static site generation for this myself. You can see the code <a href="https://github.com/chrisnewtn/chrisnewtn.github.io/">here</a>. It's a work in progress and an early one at that. Hence the sign. ⬇️</p>
+      <p>You can view the source code <a href="https://github.com/chrisnewtn/chrisnewtn.github.io/">here</a>. I'm writing it in the open, both the content and the static site generator that puts it together. It's a work in progress, and an early one at that. Hence the sign.</p>
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         <div class="under-construction">
           <div class="under-construction-inner">Under Construction</div>