diff --git a/slides/cppcon23/pages/01_intro.md b/slides/cppcon23/pages/01_intro.md
index e1cc6fe..2164350 100644
--- a/slides/cppcon23/pages/01_intro.md
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@@ -69,11 +69,11 @@ slide: Maintaining Software
+
The only constant in life is change.
- Heraclitus
@@ -89,8 +89,6 @@ what would meet those requirements, our preferred way of solving a given problem
have changed. Either way, we change code to tend to our software, just like
a gardener tends to its garden.
-click
-
After all, software is much like a living organism. It is constantly evolving
until it ceases to deliver value.
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@@ -111,11 +109,11 @@ slide: Types of Change
+
Software engineering is programming integrated over time.
- Titus Winters
@@ -126,13 +124,15 @@ more efficient. To make the code simpler, more readable, easier to understand
and change in the future.
We make these changes with good intentions. Some changes are easy and limited
-in scope, like improving a function implementation, and some are hard and may
-require large-scale refactoring, like supporting a new compiler. But regardless
-of their type, every change to our software runs the risk of breaking it.
-
-click
-
-Managing this risk is the art that makes our craft interesting.
+in scope, like fixing a compiler warning and improving a function
+implementation. And some are hard and may require large-scale refactoring,
+like supporting a new compiler. Or even larger, they could be rewriting a
+legacy system component that could take months if not years to complete.
+Like this Indiana Bell building here on the screen that was rotated in 1930
+without ceasing operations, to make room for a new city projects.
+
+But regardless of their type, every change to our software runs the risk of
+breaking it. Managing this risk is the art that makes our craft interesting.
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@@ -180,21 +180,21 @@ section: ''
In the next hour, we are going to cover what Continuous Regression Testing is
and how it is useful.
-Then we will have a live demo of a free and open source
-Continuous Regression testing system to understand how it can be used in
-practice and for real-world use cases.
+Then we will showcase a free and open source Continuous Regression testing
+system to understand how it can be used in practice and for real-world use
+cases.
-Then we will see how that system works and review some of its design decisions
+We will see how that system works and review some of its design decisions
that could be helpful for building other similar systems.
Next, we will cover how to use a regression testing tool effectively and how
to navigate the common pitfalls that lead to slow and flaky high-level tests.
-Then we will have another series of live demos to see how Continuous Regression
-Testing can help us identify other types of regressions such as changes in
-performance, and output binary size.
+Then we will also see how Continuous Regression Testing can help us identify
+other types of regressions such as changes in performance, and output binary
+size.
-And lastly, I hope to convince you that no tool or method could serve as a
+Next, I hope to convince you that no tool or method could serve as a
silver bullet and efficiently building safe systems requires a culture of
safety that combines a variety of tools and methods to mitigate the risks of
everyday code changes.
@@ -282,10 +282,11 @@ software systems. I started my career at a cyber-security company acquired
by VMware, then moved to Canon to build medical imaging software for four
years.
-A part of my talk today showcases the software that I originally built for my
-team at Canon, and then sold to other companies when I got the IP rights and
-started a startup. What I am sharing today is the story of this adventure
-that I've pursued with passion for the past five years.
+A part of my talk today showcases the software that I originally built as a
+side project for my team at Canon. And and then sold to other companies when
+I obtained its IP rights and left Canon to start a company around it.
+What I am sharing today is the story of this adventure that I've pursued
+with passion for the past five years.
-->
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diff --git a/slides/cppcon23/slides.md b/slides/cppcon23/slides.md
index c332169..d8837b4 100644
--- a/slides/cppcon23/slides.md
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@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ sectionDefault: ''
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src: ./pages/02_demo.md
-sectionDefault: Live Demo
+sectionDefault: ''
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