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From: stephen-hero <78870893+stephen-hero@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 14 Dec 2023 17:21:53 +0200
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 Congratulations! You did a great job and created a working application.
-We have put together a few ideas on how you can further improve this project by yourself.
-These improvements will not be tested within the course.
-Some improvements require changes to both the client (what is displayed in the browser)
-and the server (the application logic).
-We don't cover the client-server architecture in this course,
-so you can either explore that on your own or implement ideas that don't require investigating third-party code.
+We have put together a few ideas on how you could further improve this project on your own.
+These improvements will not be assessed as part of the course.
+Some of them may require changes to both the client side (what is displayed in the browser)
+and the server side (the application logic).
+As we don't cover the client-server architecture in this course,
+you can either explore it on your own or implement ideas that don't require investigating third-party code.
 
 **Server improvements:**
 
-- You can add more complex logic for group by or searching operations.
-- You can add an ability to upload your own photo.
+- You could add more complex logic for group-by or search operations.
+- You could add the ability to upload your own photo.
 - Currently, we lose the application state if we turn off the server.
-  You can implement the ability to save the current state of the applications in files,
-  and when the server is starting, you can extract this data.
+  You could implement a feature that saves the current state of the applications in files —
+  then, when the server starts up again, this data can be retrieved.
 
 
 **Client improvements:**
 
-- You can make alive the application via adding animations for all actions.
-- To make uploading new photo easier, you can add a special button for it.
+- You could make the application come alive by adding animations for all actions.
+- To simplify the process of uploading a new photo, you could add a special button for it.