diff --git a/entries/grug brain developer.md b/entries/grug brain developer.md
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+++ b/entries/grug brain developer.md	
@@ -14,32 +14,33 @@ grug tell many secret for young grug (also mostly for grug, grug forget
 important things). young grug should read whole grug story, but grug story long
 so old grug share favorite part:
 
-- grug fear apex predator complexity. complexity _bad_. complexity come in many
+- grug enemy apex predator complexity. complexity _bad_. complexity come in many
   form, no always see, but sense. complexity _very bad_. grug often swing club
-  but just hit grug. complexity _worse than t-rex_. grug favorite club "no", but
-  sometimes "ok" save tribe. grug build code cave strong, no let complexity
-  demon in.
+  but just hit grug own head. complexity _worse than t-rex_. grug favorite club
+  "no", but sometimes "ok" save tribe. grug build code cave strong, try no let
+  complexity demon in.
 - grug no get lost in big brain fog. big brain want think-think. grug no want
   think, grug want build. grug must build to think.
 - grug think test, agile, refactor, architecture all like old berry in forest —
-  some taste good, some make tummy ouch. grug grow cautious ...but grug still
-  like berry.
+  some taste good, some make tummy ouch. grug learn to be cautious ...but grug
+  still like berry.
 - grug dubious of shamans like test shaman, agile shaman, architect shaman.
-  shaman make idol not club. shaman claim know all good berry. grug lose many
-  shiney rock to shaman. grug reach slowly for club, but grug try stay calm.
-- grug love tool. tool separate grug from dinosaur. grug use tool to build while
+  shaman make idol not club. shaman claim know all good berry, but still make
+  tummy ouch. grug lose many shiney rock to shaman. grug reach slowly for club,
+  but grug try stay calm.
+- grug love tool. tool separate grug from dinosaur. grug use tool to build more
   think less. grug favorite tool ide, type system, debugger. grug trade all
   shiney rock for good tool.
-- grug often feel like grug have no idea what grug doing. grug fear look dumb in
-  front of big brains. young grug feel this, old grug feel this. grug stay calm.
-  when grug confused grug just say so. grug ask for help. when grug fall down
-  grug not swing club, just make joke. grug see big brain fall down too, grug
-  help. nobody impostor if everybody impostor. except you, young grug! young
-  grug impostor! that bad joke. grug sorry.
+- grug often feel like grug have no idea what grug doing, grug feel like
+  impostor. grug fear look dumb in front of big brain. grug realized young grug
+  feel this, old grug feel this. grug stay calm. when grug confused grug just
+  say so. grug ask for help. when grug fall down grug not swing club, just make
+  joke. grug see big brain fall down too, grug help. nobody impostor if
+  everybody impostor. except you, young grug! young grug impostor! that bad
+  joke. grug sorry.
 
-young grug too will face big brain, t-rex, shaman, complexity demon. grug tales
-full of oops and ouch. young grug learn. young grug will do okay and to young
-grug must be true. grug tale like map to hidden shiney rock. young grug make
-shiney rock pile, young grug become old grug, then choose give rock pile for
-better cave and drumstick or give rock pile for better club and tool. just be
-careful when give shiney rock to shaman.
+young grug too face big brain, t-rex, shaman, complexity demon. grug tale full
+of oops and ouch. grug whole tale like map to hidden shiney rock. young grug
+learn and will do okay, make shiney rock pile. young grug become old grug, then
+choose give rock pile for better cave and dino drumstick or give rock pile for
+better club and tool. just be careful when give shiney rock to shaman.