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Signed-off-by: Derek Su <derek.su@suse.com>

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@@ -39,11 +39,16 @@ Please see [here](https://github.com/longhorn/longhorn/releases/tag/v{{< current
 
 ## Warning
 
-### Unable To Attach Volumes Which Are Created Before v1.5.2 and v1.4.4
+### Unable to Attach Volumes Created Before v1.5.2 and v1.4.4
 
-The Longhorn team has identified [a critical issue](https://github.com/longhorn/longhorn/issues/9267) that affects volume attachment in Longhorn v1.7.0. We are currently working on releasing v1.7.1, which will be available soon. If your Longhorn cluster contains `engine` resources with names in the format `<volume name>-e-<8-char random id>` that are created before v1.5.2 and v1.4.4, please put v1.7.0 upgrade on hold until v1.7.1 is available.
+The Longhorn team has identified [a critical issue](https://github.com/longhorn/longhorn/issues/9267) that affects volume attachment in Longhorn v1.7.0. A fix for this issue will be included in v1.7.1, which is in active development. 
 
-You can use the following command to check if it is safe to upgrade your Longhorn cluster to v1.7.0:
+Avoid upgrading to v1.7.0 if your Longhorn cluster contains `engine` resources with the following characteristics:
+
+- Resource name: The format is `<volume name>-e-<8-char random id>`.
+- Time of creation: A Longhorn version earlier than v1.5.2 and v1.4.4 was installed on the cluster.
+
+Run the following command to check if you can safely upgrade your Longhorn cluster to v1.7.0:
 
 > ```
 > [ $(kubectl -n longhorn-system get engines.longhorn.io -o name | grep -E '\-e\-[a-z0-9]{8}$' | wc -l) -gt 0 ] && echo "Please hold off on upgrading to v1.7.0 until v1.7.1 is available." || echo "Safe to upgrade to v1.7.0."