PLB COMMENTS ADDRESSED

R/wx_plots.R

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ plot_ribbon_wx <- function(ribbon_fit_obj) {
                                             direction = "horizontal")) +
     theme(legend.title = element_blank(),
           legend.position = "none") +
-    xlab("accumulated precip (mm/hr)") + ylab("haul-out probability")
+    xlab("precip (mm/hr)") + ylab("haul-out probability")
 
   apply_consistent_y_lims <- function(this_plot){
     num_plots <- length(this_plot$layers)
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ plot_spotted_wx <- function(spotted_fit_obj) {
                                             direction = "horizontal")) +
     theme(legend.title = element_blank(),
           legend.position = "none") +
-    xlab("accumulated precip (mm/hr)") + ylab("haul-out probability")
+    xlab("precip (mm/hr)") + ylab("haul-out probability")
 
   apply_consistent_y_lims <- function(this_plot){
     num_plots <- length(this_plot$layers)
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@ plot_bearded_wx <- function(bearded_fit_obj) {
                                             direction = "horizontal")) +
     theme(legend.title = element_blank(),
           legend.position = "none") +
-    xlab("accumulated precip (mm/hr)") + ylab("haul-out probability")
+    xlab("precip (mm/hr)") + ylab("haul-out probability")
 
   apply_consistent_y_lims <- function(this_plot){
     num_plots <- length(this_plot$layers)

README.Rmd

@@ -71,24 +71,26 @@ The dependency graph for our pipeline is shown below
 
 ## Acknowledgements
 
-We recognize that the species and ecosystems studied in this paper are within
-the traditional range of the Inpuiaq and Yupik people. And, we would like to
-acknowledge and thank them as the original stewards of these ecosystems. The
-deployment of bio-logging devices used in this study were often done in
-collaboration with Alaska Native seal hunters near their communities. We would
-like to especially acknowledge the communities of Kotzebue, Koyuk, Nome,
-Nuiqsut, Scammon Bay, St. Michael, Utqiaġvik, and Ulguniq (Wainwright) and the
-following individuals: James Adams, Jeff Barger, David Barr, Wendell Booth,
-Cyrus Harris, Nereus 'Doc' Harris, Grover Harris, Lee Harris, Tom Jones, Frank
-Garfield, Brenda Goodwin, Henry Goodwin, John Goodwin, Pearl Goodwin, Willie
-Goodwin, Brett Kirk, Noah Naylor, Virgil Naylor Jr., Virgil Naylor Sr., Dan
-Savetilik, Chuck Schaeffer, Ross Schaeffer, Allen Stone, and Randy Toshavik from
-Kotzebue, Alaska; Merlin Henry from Koyuk, Alaska; Tom Gray from Nome; Vernon
-Long and Richard Tukle from Nuiqsuit, Alaska; Morgan Simon, River Simon, and Al
-Smith from Scammon Bay, Alaska; Alex Niksik Jr. from St. Michael, Alaska; Billy
-Adams, James Aiken, Tim Aiken, Howard Kittick, Gilbert Leavitt, Isaac Leavitt,
-J.R. Leavitt, and Joe Skin from Utqiaġvik, Alaska; Mary Ellen Ahmaogak, Enoch
-Oktollik, Shawn Oktollik, Stacey Osborn, and Fred Rexford from Ulguniq, Alaska.
+We recognize that the species and ecosystems we studied are within the ancestral
+and present-day environs of the Inupiat and Yup'ik people who, through many
+uncredited contributions of traditional knowledge, provided early western
+naturalists and scientists with much of what gets described as the ‘basic
+biology’ of Arctic seals. The deployment of bio-logging devices used in this
+study were often done in collaboration with Alaska Native seal hunters near
+their communities. We would like to especially acknowledge the communities of
+Kotzebue, Koyuk, Nome, Nuiqsut, Scammon Bay, St. Michael, Utqiaġvik, and Ulguniq
+(Wainwright) and the following individuals: James Adams, Jeff Barger, David
+Barr, Wendell Booth, Cyrus Harris, Nereus 'Doc' Harris, Grover Harris, Lee
+Harris, Tom Jones, Frank Garfield, Brenda Goodwin, Henry Goodwin, John Goodwin,
+Pearl Goodwin, Willie Goodwin, Brett Kirk, Noah Naylor, Virgil Naylor Jr.,
+Virgil Naylor Sr., Dan Savetilik, Chuck Schaeffer, Ross Schaeffer, Allen Stone,
+and Randy Toshavik from Kotzebue, Alaska; Merlin Henry from Koyuk, Alaska; Tom
+Gray from Nome; Vernon Long and Richard Tukle from Nuiqsuit, Alaska; Morgan
+Simon, River Simon, and Al Smith from Scammon Bay, Alaska; Alex Niksik Jr. from
+St. Michael, Alaska; Billy Adams, James Aiken, Tim Aiken, Howard Kittick,
+Gilbert Leavitt, Isaac Leavitt, J.R. Leavitt, and Joe Skin from Utqiaġvik,
+Alaska; Mary Ellen Ahmaogak, Enoch Oktollik, Shawn Oktollik, Stacey Osborn, and
+Fred Rexford from Ulguniq, Alaska.
 
 We are grateful for the assistance in catching and sampling seals by Ryan Adam,
 James Bailey, Michelle Barbieri, John Bengtson, Gavin Brady, Vladamir Burkanov,

README.md

@@ -74,26 +74,28 @@ The dependency graph for our pipeline is shown below
 
 ## Acknowledgements
 
-We recognize that the species and ecosystems studied in this paper are
-within the traditional range of the Inpuiaq and Yupik people. And, we
-would like to acknowledge and thank them as the original stewards of
-these ecosystems. The deployment of bio-logging devices used in this
-study were often done in collaboration with Alaska Native seal hunters
-near their communities. We would like to especially acknowledge the
-communities of Kotzebue, Koyuk, Nome, Nuiqsut, Scammon Bay, St. Michael,
-Utqiaġvik, and Ulguniq (Wainwright) and the following individuals: James
-Adams, Jeff Barger, David Barr, Wendell Booth, Cyrus Harris, Nereus
-‘Doc’ Harris, Grover Harris, Lee Harris, Tom Jones, Frank Garfield,
-Brenda Goodwin, Henry Goodwin, John Goodwin, Pearl Goodwin, Willie
-Goodwin, Brett Kirk, Noah Naylor, Virgil Naylor Jr., Virgil Naylor Sr.,
-Dan Savetilik, Chuck Shaeffer, Ross Schaeffer, Allen Stone, and Randy
-Toshavik from Kotzebue, Alaska; Merlin Henry from Koyuk, Alaska; Tom
-Gray from Nome; Vernon Long and Richard Tukle from Nuiqsuit, Alaska;
-Morgan Simon, River Simon, and Al Smith from Scammon Bay, Alaska; Alex
-Niksik Jr. from St. Michael, Alaska; Billy Adams, James Aiken, Tim
-Aiken, Howard Kittick, Gilbert Leavitt, Isaac Leavitt, Joe Skin from
-Utqiaġvik, Alaska; Mary Ellen Ahmaogak, Enoch Oktollik, Shawn Oktollik,
-Stacey Osborn, and Fred Rexford from Ulguniq, Alaska.
+We recognize that the species and ecosystems we studied are within the
+ancestral and present-day environs of the Inupiat and Yup’ik people who,
+through many uncredited contributions of traditional knowledge, provided
+early western naturalists and scientists with much of what gets
+described as the ‘basic biology’ of Arctic seals. The deployment of
+bio-logging devices used in this study were often done in collaboration
+with Alaska Native seal hunters near their communities. We would like to
+especially acknowledge the communities of Kotzebue, Koyuk, Nome,
+Nuiqsut, Scammon Bay, St. Michael, Utqiaġvik, and Ulguniq (Wainwright)
+and the following individuals: James Adams, Jeff Barger, David Barr,
+Wendell Booth, Cyrus Harris, Nereus ‘Doc’ Harris, Grover Harris, Lee
+Harris, Tom Jones, Frank Garfield, Brenda Goodwin, Henry Goodwin, John
+Goodwin, Pearl Goodwin, Willie Goodwin, Brett Kirk, Noah Naylor, Virgil
+Naylor Jr., Virgil Naylor Sr., Dan Savetilik, Chuck Schaeffer, Ross
+Schaeffer, Allen Stone, and Randy Toshavik from Kotzebue, Alaska; Merlin
+Henry from Koyuk, Alaska; Tom Gray from Nome; Vernon Long and Richard
+Tukle from Nuiqsuit, Alaska; Morgan Simon, River Simon, and Al Smith
+from Scammon Bay, Alaska; Alex Niksik Jr. from St. Michael, Alaska;
+Billy Adams, James Aiken, Tim Aiken, Howard Kittick, Gilbert Leavitt,
+Isaac Leavitt, J.R. Leavitt, and Joe Skin from Utqiaġvik, Alaska; Mary
+Ellen Ahmaogak, Enoch Oktollik, Shawn Oktollik, Stacey Osborn, and Fred
+Rexford from Ulguniq, Alaska.
 
 We are grateful for the assistance in catching and sampling seals by
 Ryan Adam, James Bailey, Michelle Barbieri, John Bengtson, Gavin Brady,