diff --git a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/common-ocw.md b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/common-ocw.md index c59bd3795..55c594880 100644 --- a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/common-ocw.md +++ b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/common-ocw.md @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ The Insights report will bring all this information in to a dynamic html report tfactl changes -last 1h -node local ``` - Command Output: + Example Command Output: 
     Generating System Changes From 08/08/2024 17:47:05.947 To 08/08/2024 18:47:05.950
 
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ The Insights report will bring all this information in to a dynamic html report
     tfactl param -parameter pga
     
     ```
-    Command Output:
+    Example Command Output:
     
     .----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.
     | Database Parameters                                                                          |
diff --git a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/diagcollect.md b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/diagcollect.md
index 920502367..11e68f0b4 100644
--- a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/diagcollect.md
+++ b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-commands/diagcollect.md
@@ -2,9 +2,8 @@
 # AHF Incident Diagnostic Collections 
 
 ## Introduction
-Welcome to the "AHF Incident Diagnostic Collections" lab.  In this lab you will learn about AHF diagnostic collections and then be guided through  
-viewing and generating AHF Diagnostic Collections.  First we will check that AHF knows about the Incidents you generated in the previous labs   
-and then learn how to check diagnostic collections for those Incidents.
+Welcome to the "AHF Incident Diagnostic Collections" lab.  In this lab you will learn about AHF diagnostic collections and then be guided through viewing and generating AHF Diagnostic Collections.  
+First we will check that AHF knows about the Incidents you generated in the previous labs and then learn how to check diagnostic collections for those Incidents.
 
 Estimated Lab Time: 10 Minutes
 
@@ -25,7 +24,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 AHF has 4 basic types of Incident Diagnostic Collections:-
 * Automatic, based on a limited set of detected Incidents.
     * Internal Errors, Node and Instance Evictions, hangs
-* Manual, based on a specific incident type Support Request Driven Collection (SRDC)
+* Manual, based on a specific incident type: Support Request Driven Collection (SRDC)
 * Manual, based on a looking for issues in a time range (Problem Chooser)
 * Manual, based on a time range and component (CRS, RDBMS,...) 
 > Note: Bypassing problem chooser and using long collection times for multiple components can lead to very large collections.
@@ -188,6 +187,8 @@ You can at this point choose one of the detected events to generate a collection
 You will select **ORA-00600** which will do a manual collection for the ORA-00600 
 > Note: This is equivalent to running the ORA-00600 SRDC collection directly.
 
+> Note: It can take a few minutes to complete the collection so now might be a good time to read on and then come back to this at thend if you have time. 
+
 Example Command Output:
 
 
@@ -240,8 +241,6 @@ Logs are being collected to: /u01/app/oracle.ahf/data/repository/srdc_internaler
 /u01/app/oracle.ahf/data/repository/srdc_internalerror_collection_Thu_Aug_08_20_24_43_UTC_2024_node_local/lvracdb-s01-2024-08-08-1452081.tfa_srdc_internalerror_Thu_Aug_08_20_24_42_UTC_2024.zip
 

 
-It can take a few minutes to complete the collection so now might be a good time to read on and then move on to the Next Lab.
-
 If you had selected 'Display Problem Categories' You would have been able to choose from one of the below categories to make your collection
 
 
diff --git a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-reports/insightsreports.md b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-reports/insightsreports.md
index ca4f7045e..12d6b91ae 100644
--- a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-reports/insightsreports.md
+++ b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-reports/insightsreports.md
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
 
 This lab will show you how to use AHF Insights reports to help diagnose problems.
 
-Estimated Lab Time: 20 Minutes
+Estimated Lab Time: 40 Minutes
 
 ### Objectives
 - Get a bird's eye view of your database system from diagnostic perspective
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ Estimated Lab Time: 20 Minutes
 - Leverage AHF Insights to resolve identified problems
 
 ### Prerequisites
-- System which allows downloading file using *wget* command
+- System which allows downloading files using *wget* command
 - Browser which can render html and javascript
 
 
diff --git a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-upgrade/check-ahf.md b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-upgrade/check-ahf.md
index ea4850736..67cf3f736 100644
--- a/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-upgrade/check-ahf.md
+++ b/ahf/ahf-Insights/ahf-upgrade/check-ahf.md
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 
 ## Task 1: Connect to a Database system node and determine the location of the AHF Installation
 
-1. 	If you are not already connected to one of you Database Sytem nodes. 
+1. 	If you are not already connected to one of you Database System nodes. 
 	Using one of your Public IP addresses, enter the command below to login as the *opc* user and verify connection to your nodes.
 
     ```
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 	cat /etc/oracle.ahf.loc
 	
 	```
-	Command Output:
+	Example Command Output:
 	
 	/u01/app/oracle.ahf
 	
 
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 	cat /u01/app/oracle.ahf/install.properties
 	
 	```
-	Command Output:
+	Example Command Output:
 	
 
 	AHF_HOME=/u01/app/oracle.ahf
 	BUILD_VERSION=2402000
@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 	tfactl print status
 	
 	```
-	Command output:
+	Example Command output:
 	
 	.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------.
 	| Host      | Status of TFA | PID   | Port | Version    | Build ID              | Inventory Status |
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 	tfactl print scanfiles
 	
 	```
-	Command output:
+	Example Command output:
 	
 	/var/log/messages
 	/u01/app/oracle/diag/rdbms/racximwm_8wz_bom/racXIMWM1/trace/alert_racXIMWM1.log
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ In this lab, you will:
 	ahfctl statusahf -compliance
 	
 	```
-	Command output:
+	Example Command output:
 
 	![](../ahf-upgrade/images/orachk_sched.png =60%x*)
 	
diff --git a/ahf/ahf-Insights/intro/intro.md b/ahf/ahf-Insights/intro/intro.md
index a72b3774b..fd8317806 100644
--- a/ahf/ahf-Insights/intro/intro.md
+++ b/ahf/ahf-Insights/intro/intro.md
@@ -45,11 +45,10 @@ There is an ongoing project to pull all of these tools under the single 'ahf' co
 
 ## Workshop Objectives
 - Connect to a DB System
-- Understand how to identify and Check AHF
-- Upgrade AHF to the latest version
-- Know how to set up Auto Update of AHF for larger fleets
+- Find your way around AHF and check out the AHF DBA Command Line Tools
 - Use AHF to detect and triage Incidents
-- Gather and View AHF Insights reports
+- Gather and Use AHF Insights reports to help determine root cause and resolution for Issues
+- Optionally Upgrade AHF to the latest version
 
 ## Learn more