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Author: rdner

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 						<div>Email: <a href="mailto:denis@rdner.de">denis@rdner.de</a></div>
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-				<p>I'm a software engineer with more than <span class="total-years">a decade</span> of experience.</p>
-				<p>My experience is quite diverse: it goes from binary protocols and communication with devices to back-end services and big front-end apps. Although I worked on user interfaces in the past, I found my passion in building complex distributed systems.</p>
-				<p>During my career I designed, built and led a variety of projects that turned out to be successful. In my working environment I value evidence-based decisions, attention to detail, personal responsibility and ownership. I always prioritize user experience and prefer pragmatic solutions with a focus on maintainability, performance and security.</p>
+				<p>I'm a software engineer with more than <span class="total-years">a decade</span> of experience, ranging from binary protocols and communication with devices to high-scale front-end apps and back-end services. Although I worked on user interfaces in the past, I found my passion in building complex distributed systems.</p>
+				<p>Throughout my career I designed, built and led a variety of projects that turned out to be successful. In my work I value evidence-based decisions and attention to detail. I always prioritize user experience and prefer pragmatic solutions with a focus on maintainability, performance and security.</p>
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 				<h2>Experience</h2>