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@@ -59,14 +59,14 @@ It's simple - *out of respect*.
The same way you don't call Alice Eve or Steve, and apologize if you slip up. It's okay to make mistakes, we all do, the effort is what counts. Even if you subscribed to the attempt at dragging this into politics[^eff], you do you, as long as you show others respect and decency.
-Adding to this, whilst I consciously understand when people the odd mistake, it doesn't take away from the distress that I feel. Unfortunately it's hard to describe it to people that don't feel the same way how incredibly important it is emotionally.
+Adding to this, whilst I consciously understand when people make the odd mistake, but it doesn't take away from the distress that I feel. Unfortunately it's hard to describe how incredibly important it is to people that don't live with the same experience, but it's the same as with many other things.
## Wrap up
To wrap things up, non-binary identity is broad and encompasses many different gender expressions outside of the traditional male and female identities. I wrote this to try and explain (some of) my experience. It's unique but at the same time it's one out of many. To those that took the time to read a bit about me, I'm grateful and I want to encourage you to also ask others with gender non-conforming identities about what it means for them.
And hey! Shoot over any questions you have, I super appreciate them \<3
-I'll leave with Oxford Blood by Autoheart
+I'll leave with Oxford Blood by Autoheart, it's a song that means a lot to me.
[^isof]: For example, the government authority *Institutet för språk och folkminnen* (Institute for Language and Folklore) explicitly tells people to "*Respect individuals choice of pronouns - if you know that the person prefers certain pronouns you should use them, it can be he, she, they, or something else.*" [Source (in Swedish)](https://www.isof.se/stod-och-sprakrad/spraktjanster/klarsprakshjalpen/skriv-klarsprak/tank-pa-dina-lasare/fordjupning-tank-pa-dina-lasare/anvand-inkluderande-sprak)