fix(text): And improve the advisor text on the recruitment screen

[EttyKitty]

Summary by Sourcery

Improve the advisor text regarding recruitment and gene-seed status.

Bug Fixes:

• Fix multiple grammar and style issues in the advisor text.
• Correct the logic for displaying the recruitment status based on the number of marines and the recruiting status.
• Fix the logic for displaying the gene-seed status and the number of recruiting worlds.

[sourcery-ai]

Reviewer's Guide by Sourcery

This PR improves the advisor text regarding recruitment, making it clearer and more informative. It also fixes some grammatical errors and inconsistencies.

File-Level Changes

Change	Details	Files
Improved clarity and information in the advisor text by providing more context and details about the recruitment process.	Added information about the current recruitment rate and its implications. Clarified the conditions under which the chapter can recruit more marines. Provided more details about the status of current recruits, including their names and training timelines. Added explanations for the lack of gene-seed or the chapter's inability to recruit due to mutations. Included information about the number of recruiting worlds and their impact on recruitment speed and expenses.	scripts/scr_recruit_data/scr_recruit_data.gml
Fixed grammatical errors and inconsistencies in the advisor text.	Corrected punctuation and sentence structure. Improved wording for better clarity and flow. Ensured consistent use of terminology and formatting.	scripts/scr_recruit_data/scr_recruit_data.gml
Improved code readability and maintainability.	Reformatted code for better readability. Added comments to explain complex logic. Simplified conditional statements for easier understanding. Used more descriptive variable names.	scripts/scr_recruit_data/scr_recruit_data.gml

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[sourcery-ai]

Hey @EttyKitty - I've reviewed your changes - here's some feedback:

Overall Comments:

• The @mixin tag appears to be incorrectly used here since this function isn't implementing any mixin functionality. Consider removing it or clarifying its purpose.

Here's what I looked at during the review

• 🟡 General issues: 1 issue found
• 🟢 Security: all looks good
• 🟢 Testing: all looks good
• 🟢 Complexity: all looks good
• 🟢 Documentation: all looks good

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[OH296]

I assume this is fine to merge but will leave for now just in case