Update firewall tasks

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diff --git a/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/firewall_2.md b/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/firewall_2.md
@@ -14,17 +14,17 @@ cyber.setupFirewall(function () {
 ```
 
 ## Worm @showdialog
-It's a Virus! This virus seems to be a worm that is trying to enter...
+It's some malware! This malware seems to be a worm that is trying to enter the castle...
 We need to create a rule to stop it coming in the castle!   
 ![Worm](https://raw.githubusercontent.com/CausewayDigital/Minecraft-EE-MakeCode/main/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/images/level_2.jpg)
 
 
 ## Deny rule
 We need to come up with a rule to block access to the worm, but still allow villagers in.   
-Add a ``||cyber:Add deny firewall rule||`` block to your rules. It allows you to tell the guards to deny access to anyone that satisfies the rule.  
+Add a ``||cyber:Add deny firewall rule||`` block to your rules. It allows you to tell the guards to deny access to anything that satisfies the rule.  
 
 ### Distinguishing Features
-Can you see anything that might help us distinguish between a villager and a virus?   
+Can you see anything that might help us distinguish between a villager and a worm?   
 Press the < (back) button to check the lookout view for what is coming if you aren't sure.
 ```template
 cyber.setupFirewall(function () {

diff --git a/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/firewall_3.md b/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/firewall_3.md
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ It's a Virus!
 
 
 ## Stop the virus
-Add another rule to stop the virus. 
+A different type of malware is coming! Add another rule to stop the virus. 
 Can you see anything that might help us distinguish between a villager and a virus?   
 Remember, you can press the < (back) button to check the lookout view again.
 

diff --git a/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/firewall_4.md b/tutorials/cyber-kingdom/firewall/firewall_4.md
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Are they all going to be allowed through the firewall?
 
 ## More villagers
 You may need to make rules using an **and** statement. This means you can combine 2 rules together.   
-Watch out, some of these villages don't have hats, but they are carrying items like a pickaxe or map.   
+Watch out, some of these villages don't have hats, but they are carrying items like a pickaxe or map. This means we can't just block anything not wearing a hat.  
 
 
 ```template
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ cyber.addDenyFirewallRule(cyber.requireHat(WearingHat.NoHat))
 ```
 
 ### ~ tutorialhint
-The virus has 2 legs and doesn't seem to be holding anything.
+The virus doesn't seem to be wearing a hat and doesn't seem to be holding anything.
 
 ```package
 causeway-digital-makecode-extension=github:causewaydigital/pxt-causeway-digital-extension#cyber-kingdom

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