Rewords many event announcements & some medical things

code/game/objects/items/weapons/autopsy.dm

@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 //please preference put stuff where it's easy to find - C
 // todo: redo autopsy
 /obj/item/autopsy_scanner
-	name = "biopsy scanner"
+	name = "autopsy scanner"
 	desc = "Extracts information on wounds."
 	icon = 'icons/obj/autopsy_scanner.dmi'
 	icon_state = ""

code/modules/events/carp_migration.dm

@@ -36,9 +36,9 @@ GLOBAL_LIST_INIT(carp_count,list())// a list of Z levels (string), associated wi
 
 /datum/event/carp_migration/announce()
 	if(severity > EVENT_LEVEL_MODERATE)
-		command_announcement.Announce("A massive migration of unknown biological entities has been detected in the vicinity of the [location_name()]. Exercise external operations with caution.")
+		command_announcement.Announce("A massive migration of space-borne biological entities has been detected in the vicinity of the [location_name()]. Exercise external operations with caution.")
 	else
-		command_announcement.Announce("A large migration of unknown biological entities has been detected in the vicinity of the [location_name()]. Caution is advised.")
+		command_announcement.Announce("A large migration of space-borne biological entities has been detected in the vicinity of the [location_name()]. Caution is advised.")
 
 
 /datum/event/carp_migration/proc/spawn_carp(var/num_groups, var/group_size_min, var/group_size_max, var/dir, var/speed)

code/modules/events/cult.dm

@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 	endWhen = 45
 
 /datum/event/cult/announce()
-	command_announcement.Announce("Attention [station_name()], unknown humanoid and non-humanoid entities are warping onto the ships! Advise immediate removal of these intruders before productivity aboard gets hindered!", "Screaming Signals Detected", new_sound = sound('sound/effects/c_alarm.mp3',volume=4))
+	command_announcement.Announce("Attention [station_name()], unknown humanoid and non-humanoid entities have been detected warping into the facility! We advise crew move to a secure area immediately!", "Screaming Signals Detected", new_sound = sound('sound/effects/c_alarm.mp3',volume=2))
 
 
 /datum/event/cult/start()
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
 	if(istype(victim, /obj/overmap/entity/visitable/ship/talon))
 		command_announcement.Announce("Attention ITV Talon. You have run into a hostile sub-sector. High potential for humanoid and non-humanoid entities to warp on your ship. Brace.", "Screaming Signals Intercepted")
 	else
-		command_announcement.Announce("Attention [station_name()], the ship has run into a hostile sub-sector and reports of humanoid and non-humanoid entities are warping onto the ships! Advise immediate removal of these intruders before productivy aboard gets hindered!", "Screaming Signals Intercepted", new_sound = 'sound/effects/c_alarm.mp3')//,volume=4)
+		command_announcement.Announce("Attention [station_name()], the ship has run into a hostile sub-sector and humanoid and non-humanoid signatures have been detected warping aboard! Expect boarders imminently!", "Screaming Signals Intercepted", new_sound = 'sound/effects/c_alarm.mp3')//,volume=4)
 		return
 
 /datum/event/cult/overmap/start()		// override - cancel if not main ship since it doesn't properly target the actual triggering ship

code/modules/events/dust.dm

@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 	if(victim)
 		command_announcement.Announce("The [location_name()] is now passing through a belt of space dust.", "[location_name()] Sensor Array")
 	else
-		command_announcement.Announce("Debris resulting from activity on another nearby asteroid is approaching \the [location_name()]", "Dust Alert")
+		command_announcement.Announce("A micrometeoroid cloud has been detected approaching \the [location_name()]", "Dust Alert")
 
 /datum/event/dust/tick()
 	if(prob(10))

code/modules/events/gravity.dm

@@ -34,4 +34,4 @@
 			if(A.z in zLevels)
 				A.gravitychange(gravity_is_on, A)
 
-		command_announcement.Announce("Gravity generators are again functioning within normal parameters. Sorry for any inconvenience.", "Gravity Restored")
+		command_announcement.Announce("Gravity generators are again functioning within normal parameters. We apologize for the inconvenience.", "Gravity Restored")

code/modules/events/meteors.dm

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 /datum/event/meteor_wave/announce()
 	switch(severity)
 		if(EVENT_LEVEL_MAJOR)
-			command_announcement.Announce("Meteors have been detected on collision course with \the [location_name()].", "Meteor Alert", new_sound = sound('sound/effects/meteor_storm.ogg',volume=8))
+			command_announcement.Announce("Meteors have been detected on collision course with \the [location_name()].", "Meteor Alert", new_sound = sound('sound/effects/meteor_storm.ogg',volume=2))
 		else
 			command_announcement.Announce("\The [location_name()] is now in a meteor shower.", "Meteor Alert")
 

code/modules/events/rogue_drones.dm

@@ -24,17 +24,17 @@
 	var/rng = rand(1,5)
 	switch(rng)
 		if(1)
-			msg = "A combat drone wing operating in close orbit above Sif has failed to return from a anti-piracy sweep.  If any are sighted, \
+			msg = "A combat drone wing operating within the sector has failed to return from a anti-piracy sweep.  If any are sighted, \
 			approach with caution."
 		if(2)
-			msg = "Contact has been lost with a combat drone wing in Sif orbit.  If any are sighted in the area, approach with \
+			msg = "Contact has been lost with a combat drone wing in the sector.  If any are sighted in the area, approach with \
 			caution."
 		if(3)
-			msg = "Unidentified hackers have targeted a combat drone wing deployed around Sif. If any are sighted in the area, approach with caution."
+			msg = "Unidentified hackers have targeted a combat drone wing deployed in this sector. If any are sighted in the area, approach with caution."
 		if(4)
 			msg = "A passing derelict ship's drone defense systems have just activated. If any are sighted in the area, use caution."
 		if(5)
-			msg = "We're detecting a swarm of small objects approaching your station.  Most likely a bunch of drones.  Please exercise caution if you see any."
+			msg = "We're detecting a swarm of small objects approaching your station.  Sensor returns indicate it may be a fleet of drones.  Please exercise caution."
 
 	command_announcement.Announce(msg, "Rogue drone alert")
 

nano/templates/dish_incubator.tmpl

@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
     </div>
     <div class='itemContent'>
       <span class='{{:data.can_breed_virus ? "good" : "average"}}'>
-        {{:!data.dish_inserted ? 'N/A' : data.can_breed_virus ? 'Suitable' : 'No hemolytic samples detected'}}
+        {{:!data.dish_inserted ? 'N/A' : data.can_breed_virus ? 'Suitable' : 'No hematologic samples detected'}}
       </span>
       {{if data.blood_already_infected}}
         <br/>

tgui/packages/tgui/interfaces/DishIncubator.js

@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ export const DishIncubator = (props, context) => {
                   </ProgressBar>
                 </LabeledList.Item>
                 <LabeledList.Item label="Breeding Environment" color={can_breed_virus ? 'good' : 'average'}>
-                  {dish_inserted ? (can_breed_virus ? 'Suitable' : 'No hemolytic samples detected') : 'N/A'}
+                  {dish_inserted ? (can_breed_virus ? 'Suitable' : 'No hematologic samples detected') : 'N/A'}
                   {blood_already_infected ? (
                     <Box color="bad">CAUTION: Viral infection detected in blood sample.</Box>
                   ) : null}