Improve introduction #12
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The last "ultimate goal" is a repetition of the first bullet point (removed). Addressed "interoperability between systems/repositories" instead of "interoperability between information packages".
General proof-reading of the introduction. One correction at the end also relates to: DILCISBoard#12
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| This document introduces the concept of a Common Specification for Information Packages. It aims to serve three main purposes: | |||
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| 1. Establish a common understanding of the requirements which need to be met in order to achieve interoperability of Information Packages; | |||
| 1. Establish a common understanding about the requirements which need to be met in order to achieve interoperability between repositories and other information systems with respect to the use of Information Packages; | |||
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This changes the focus of the introduction from IP interoperability to system interoperability. Isn't it too limiting?
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The idea behind the proposed change is that "interoperability" it is actually about (repository) systems being able to handle the information packages.
In this sense, interoperability is not a characteristic of the information package, but the use of E-ARK compliant information packages is a means to achieve system interoperability.
Regarding the CS defining a common base for SIP, AIP, and DIP the purpose is also to make conversions - from SIP to AIP or from AIP(s) to DIP - more efficient. Here it is about interoperability between the systems or modules for SIP creation, storage, or access.
Addressing issue #11
The last "ultimate goal" is a repetition of the first bullet point (removed).
Addressed "interoperability between systems/repositories" instead of "interoperability between information packages".
General proof-reading added.