5th pass: Improve descriptions

JGantts · Feb 2, 2019 · 09e3842 · 09e3842
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diff --git a/dev/Daedalus/DAE-installation.pray.cos b/dev/Daedalus/DAE-installation.pray.cos
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 *# DS-Name "CoC - Daedalus"
 *# Agent Animation File = "fav_place_coc_dae.c16"
 *# Agent Sprite First Image = 1
-*# desc = "This is  Daedalus. It's a whole new room to explore with something for all creatures!\n\nRequires the Universal Hub!\n\nPart of the Children of Capillata. Designed by and images by Silvak. Maintained by and code by Zzzzoot."
+*# desc = "This is Daedalus. It's a whole new room to explore with something for all creatures!\n\nRequires the Universal Hub!\n\nPart of the Children of Capillata. Designed by and images by Silvak. Maintained by and code by Zzzzoot."
 
 *# attach coc_daedalus.blk ball.c16 coc_dae_uhdae_daeuh_door.c16 coc_agents_pots.c16 fav_place_coc_dae.c16 coc_lib_c3lift.c16 boi2.wav but1.wav clik.wav ding.wav hit_.wav
 *# Link DAE-ball-events.cos DAE-door-events.cos DAE-pod-events.cos LIB-c3lift-events.cos

diff --git a/dev/Universal Hub/CoC.catalogue b/dev/Universal Hub/CoC.catalogue
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ TAG "zot_CAT"
 "This is the Catillipac v1.2.1!\nIt has an Enhanced Empathic Vendor and a heat pan similar to the ones in the Meso.\n\nYou will want to add more food for your creatures."
 
 TAG "zot_UH"
-"This is the Universal Hub v1.2.1! It's a bit windy in here.\nIt has eight doors for future expansion by all developers. Contact Zzzzoot if you would like to use one.\n\nThe Universal Hub is essential for using any other Children of Capillata rooms, as it connects them to the main ship."
+"This is the Universal Hub v1.2.1! It's a bit windy in here.\nIt has eight doors for future expansion by all developers. Contact Zzzzoot if you would like to use one.\n\nThe Universal Hub is essential for using any of the other Children of Capillata rooms, as it connects them to the main ship."
 
 TAG "zot_DAE"
 "This is Daedalus v1.2.1!\nIt has a beach, a cave, and a desert. Norns, Grendels, and even Ettins should find themselves at home here. Not that they'll necessarily get along ;-)"