Commenting Pickles - second round

[dannywillems]

Explain your changes:
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Explain how you tested your changes:
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Checklist:

• Dependency versions are unchanged
  • Notify Velocity team if dependencies must change in CI
• Modified the current draft of release notes with details on what is completed or incomplete within this project
• Document code purpose, how to use it
  • Mention expected invariants, implicit constraints
• Tests were added for the new behavior
  • Document test purpose, significance of failures
  • Test names should reflect their purpose
• All tests pass (CI will check this if you didn't)
• Serialized types are in stable-versioned modules
• Does this close issues? List them

• Closes #0000