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[REVIEW ONLY] Add written-word drafts since a PR is a good way to review #4095

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@lornajane lornajane commented Sep 15, 2024

In preparation for the release, please review (BUT DO NOT MERGE) the proposed wording for release notes and a blog post. I couldn't think of a better place to put words that we could all review, comment on and edit so I hope this makes sense. Pull request contains:

  • one announcement blog post
  • one set of release notes (the lines labelled [3.1.1] are for that version only, I'll take the whole line out for the 3.0.4 release notes, and remove the indicator for the 3.1.1 ones - it just seemed easier than providing two almost-identical documents for you to review

With a big thankyou to @handrews for mining the epic diff to produce a huge starting point of information that I've tried to usefully summarise without eliminating all the detail!

The goal here is to check for mistakes and showstoppers; let's try not to polish forever. This one is NOT an authoritative document that must never be updated!

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Cool! Only minor nits.

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Looks good! 👍

Will the 3.0.4 releases be done in a separate PR or will they be added to this one?

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- examples and additional documentation moved to https://learn.openapis.org
- the HTML rendering of the specification at https://spec.openapis.org is now considered the authoritative version (formerly it was the Markdown source on GitHub)

OpenAPI description writers should mark their OpenAPI descriptions with the version of OpenAPI specification they used to write their specification, updating where possible.
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Why? Can this be explained more? (note that this is more of a request to description document authors than changes to 3.1.1, so perhaps break it out of this list?)

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Looks good overall! Some wordsmithing suggestions to consider.

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Co-authored-by: Darrel <darrmi@microsoft.com>
ralfhandl and others added 2 commits September 17, 2024 10:24
Co-authored-by: Marsh Gardiner <marsh.gardiner@gmail.com>
including the two I missed before

Co-authored-by: Marsh Gardiner <marsh.gardiner@gmail.com>
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@lornajane Looks good to me. Thanks.

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@mikekistler The release notes are almost identical for both versions, I ended up with nothing to add for 3.0.4, and just a few lines that are 3.1.1-only, these are clearly marked. We'll need to edit/remote them for each version accordingly when creating the releases.

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Great work- I have some suggestions but I don't think there's anything here that I'd consider a blocker.

I feel like we should probably explain tooling expectations around the patch number in the openapi field more clearly somewhere, but I don't know that this is the place to do that.

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Many of @handrews' suggestions

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This still looks good to me after the various last-minute changes. I marked some conversations resolved as they either involved a response to me, or mentioned Marsh and he put a thumbs-up on the mention.

I think the wording on OpenAPI Description and lowercase-document are sufficient here, and we don't need ot get into the level of "document" vs "OpenAPI Document" in this announcement. The usage of lowercase-document matches how we still use that word in the final updates.

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