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README.md

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 Paraphrasing a movie line is my favorite approach to learn a foreign language. This was why I was able to speak
 close-native English in early days. I used this same tactic for German. One morning I was studying German with the
 famous German WW2 movie [_Generation War_](https://youtu.be/TmyGPX23px4?si=wk3V62vLUe9zFzfo). Managing to find its
-subtitles[^1][^2][^3] were easy for me. A problem, however, soon arose as I proceed with them: _the subtitles had
-errors - missing couple of phrases every few other lines_. This is a big NO for language learners like me. In old days
-10 years ago, I would've reached a dead end. 
+subtitles[^1][^2][^3] were easy for me. A problem, however, soon arose as I proceeded with them: _the subtitles had
+errors - missing couple of phrases every few other lines_. This was a big NO for language learners like me. In old days
+10 years ago, I would've reached a dead end... 
 
 [^1]: https://www.opensubtitles.org/en/subtitles/6243166/generation-war-eine-andere-zeit-de
 [^2]: https://www.opensubtitles.org/en/subtitles/6243167/generation-war-ein-anderer-krieg-de
 [^3]: https://www.opensubtitles.org/en/subtitles/6243168/generation-war-ein-anderes-land-de
 
-Almost immediately, I had this idea of having AI figure out those missing words for me; so then tried
+Almost immediately, I had this idea of having AI figure out those missing words for me; so tried
 [OpenAI's Whisper](https://huggingface.co/spaces/openai/whisper) which, quite surprisingly, yield 100% accurate results.
 This marked the milestone where AI produced real value for my life.
 
 Feeling so excited, I decided to industrialize this process and hereby present it as
-[Project Tiger on Hugging Face](https://huggingface.co/spaces/QubitPi/tiger), an __AI transcription service that targets
-specifically for language learners__
+[Project Tiger on Hugging Face](https://huggingface.co/spaces/QubitPi/tiger), an __AI movie transcription service that
+targets specifically for language learners__
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > 
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 > > _"It is tempting to view the appearance of the Tiger tank as revolutionary, ... the end result was a machine that
 > > represented a quantum leap forward in tank design and changed everything - forever"_[^4]
 > 
-> This project also changed my view toward AI and serves as an empirical guidance on how AI should help people's life
-> with NLP
+> As _Tiger_ had guided the direction of next-generation heavy tank, this project also revolutionized my view toward AI
+> empirically and serves as an empirical guidance on how AI should help people's life with NLP
 
 [^4]: _[Tiger tank : Panzerkampfwagen VI Tiger I Ausf. E (SdKfz 181): owner's workshop manual](https://a.co/d/28OzPsK)_, The Tank Museum, 2011. p.13