Update the wording

Signed-off-by: Olga Bulat <obulat@gmail.com>

documentation/projects/proposals/rekognition_data/20240510-implementation_plan_machine_generated_tags_frontend.md

@@ -133,13 +133,15 @@ were discarded as they would be less user-friendly.
    screen readers treat the tooltips differently.
 2. Display one section per each machine-generated tag provider, and label
    sections with relevant heading, e.g. "Machine-Generated Tags: Rekognition".
-   In each section, list the tags in the order of their accuracy. Each tag would
-   display the tag name and the tag accuracy. This way, the user will see the
-   data without additional actions such as hovering. We have enough room on the
-   page to display this data in full. As a bonus, if a tag is generated by
-   multiple providers, the user will see that different providers generate the
-   same tag, and will be able to see the difference in accuracy between the
-   providers.
+   Each provider section would sort the tags in the order of their accuracy, and
+   each tag would display the tag name and the tag accuracy. This way, the user
+   would see the data without additional actions such as hovering. We have
+   enough room on the page to display this data in full. As a bonus, if a tag is
+   generated by multiple providers, the users would be able to see that
+   different providers generate the same tag, and the difference in accuracy
+   between the providers. This option wasn't selected because we don't yet have
+   enough user data to know if the users would find this information useful
+   instead of overwhelming.
 
 ## Design
 
@@ -174,12 +176,10 @@ who do not have a hover action. MDN's section on tooltip best practices suggests
 providing "clear labels and sufficient body text" instead of tooltips that hide
 important information.
 
-The third alternative option, where the provider is displayed once per the list
-of all the generated tags generated by it, and accuracy is displayed on the tag
-itself, is the most accessible option. The user will see (or hear) the provider
-and the accuracy of the tag without any additional actions. We need to make sure
-that the tag name and its accuracy are separated (such as with an invisible,
-`sr-only`, dot) to make the screen readers add a pause between them.
+If we decide to display the accuracy on the tag together with its name (option 2
+above), it is important to separate the tag name and its accuracy (with an
+invisible, `sr-only`, dot, for instance) to make the screen readers add a pause
+between them.
 
 ## Rollback