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Signed-off-by: Kingdon Barrett <kingdon+github@tuesdaystudios.com>

README.md

@@ -17,28 +17,30 @@ The upcoming meetings, talks and community events in the next month are maintain
 
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-Check out the <https://www.youtube.com/@fluxcd> channel for recordings.
+Our calendar data is hosted on the CNCF-Flux-Dev List, which has the option to subscribe: <https://lists.cncf.io/g/cncf-flux-dev/calendar>
 
 We are very happy if new users, contributors and developers join and we can put names to faces!
 
-Our calendar data is hosted on the CNCF Lists service: <https://lists.cncf.io/g/cncf-flux-dev/calendar>
+Review how to [subscribe to the Flux Calendar](#subscribing-to-the-flux-calendar) to add the Flux meetups on your own calendar.
 
-Review how to [subscribe to the Flux Calendar](#subscribing-to-the-flux-calendar) to see Flux meetups on your own calendar.
+We are looking forward to seeing you there.
 
-The recurring meeting schedules are listed below in their source time zones, with a link to the meeting "Minutes" docs.
+#### Recordings
 
-We are looking forward to seeing you there.
+Check out the <https://www.youtube.com/@fluxcd> channel for recordings of Flux Dev Meetings and other Flux-related playlists.
 
-#### Scheduled Meetings
+#### Schedules
 
-Some regularly scheduled meetings are scheduled in their hosts' local time zones.
+The recurring meetings and their schedules (in English) are listed below with their source time zones, and a link to any meeting "Minutes" docs.
 
-Do note that Daylight Savings Time changes can vary across regions, which can cause some confusion.
+Some regularly scheduled meetings are scheduled in their hosts' local time zones.
 
 | Which | Times | Agenda & Minutes | Recordings |
 | ----- | ----- | ---------------- | ---------- |
-| Flux Dev Meetings | "early" meeting: Uneven weeks: Wed, 12:00 UTC, "late" meeting: Even weeks: Thu, 15:00 UTC | [Document](https://docs.google.com/document/d/167SKpaDUrpiBqNR2lXnQjXyb5Gxq6uB-Fujz7eBQxyw/edit) | [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLwjBY07V76p5mWNgdINjIiuUiItIeLhIN) |
-| Flux Bug Scrub | "early" meeting: Even weeks: Wed, 8:00 Eastern US time, "late" meeting: Odd weeks: Thu, 13:00 Eastern US time, "AEST Edition" Wednesday 8:00 Brisbane time | [Bug Scrub Template (#0090)](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1Hv9BIr0vFAOHscqYzmlKKG1Il18Nw8X_iiDyi0HRgCs/edit#gid=2133538565) | [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4unRRJp-o0&list=PLwjBY07V76p6J6z30cBRqS_N0Ka6NhEsY) |
+| Flux Dev Meetings | "early" meeting: Uneven weeks: Wed, 12:00 UTC <br/>"late" meeting: Even weeks: Thu, 15:00 UTC | [Document](https://docs.google.com/document/d/167SKpaDUrpiBqNR2lXnQjXyb5Gxq6uB-Fujz7eBQxyw/edit) | [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLwjBY07V76p5mWNgdINjIiuUiItIeLhIN) |
+| Flux Bug Scrub | "early" meeting: Even weeks: Wed, 8:00 Eastern US time, <br/>"late" meeting: Odd weeks: Thu, 13:00 Eastern US time, <br/>"AEST Edition" Wednesday 8:00 Brisbane time | [Bug Scrub Template (#0090)](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1Hv9BIr0vFAOHscqYzmlKKG1Il18Nw8X_iiDyi0HRgCs/edit#gid=2133538565) | [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c4unRRJp-o0&list=PLwjBY07V76p6J6z30cBRqS_N0Ka6NhEsY) |
+
+Do note that Daylight Savings Time changes can vary across regions, which can cause some confusion.
 
 The calendar at <https://fluxcd.io/community#meetings> has been localized to show the events in your local time zone.