Final copy updates (#92)

# Description Final (?) Copy changes - Closes #91
frequency-chain · Nov 15, 2024 · ed79e1d · ed79e1d
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diff --git a/src/components/Sections/Developers.svelte b/src/components/Sections/Developers.svelte
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <script lang="ts">
   import { Button } from '@frequency-chain/style-guide';
+  import { base } from '$app/paths';
   import SlideIn from '../SlideIn.svelte';
   import SectionWrapper from './SectionWrapper.svelte';
   import FrequencyDevelopers from '$lib/assets/frequency-developers.png';
@@ -32,10 +33,10 @@
     <DeveloperSteps />
   </div>
   <section class="my-f56 flex justify-center px-[36px]">
-    <Button size="lg" class="h6 p-f16 lg:hidden">
+    <Button href="{base}/docs" size="lg" class="h6 p-f16 lg:hidden">
       {DeveloperStepsText.button.title}
     </Button>
-    <Button size="lg" class="mt-[56px] hidden lg:block">
+    <Button href="{base}/docs" size="lg" class="mt-[56px] hidden lg:block">
       {DeveloperStepsText.button.text_html}
     </Button>
   </section>

diff --git a/src/components/Sections/Mission/MissionItems.svelte b/src/components/Sections/Mission/MissionItems.svelte
@@ -11,19 +11,19 @@
     {
       iconAlt: 'Fingerprint',
       icon: Fingerprint,
-      body: `Offering everyone a self-sovereign <span class="font-bold text-teal">digital social iconAltentity</span> that they may use
+      body: `Offering everyone a self-sovereign <span class="font-bold text-teal">digital social identity</span> that they may use
       to sign in and share data across the applications they choose.`,
     },
     {
       iconAlt: 'App',
       icon: App,
-      body: `Allowing people to <span class="font-bold text-teal">freely move among applications</span> and proviconAlters rather than
+      body: `Allowing people to <span class="font-bold text-teal">freely move among applications</span> and providers rather than
       being forced to accept application changes that worsen their experience.`,
     },
     {
       iconAlt: 'Network',
       icon: Network,
-      body: `Offering application proviconAlters practical <span class="font-bold text-teal">economics</span> that make blockchain usage
+      body: `Offering application providers practical <span class="font-bold text-teal">economics</span> that make blockchain usage
       feasible and desirable.`,
     },
     {

diff --git a/src/lib/consts.ts b/src/lib/consts.ts
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ export const MAX_MOBILE_WIDTH: number = 1300;
 export const DeveloperStepsText = {
   button: {
     title: 'Developer Portal',
-    text_html: 'Learn More About Developer Portal', // ...
+    text_html: 'Learn More About Developer Portal',
   },
   header: {
     title: 'Developer Advantages:',
@@ -16,12 +16,13 @@ export const DeveloperStepsText = {
   },
   two: {
     title: 'Open',
-    text_html: 'Build your app with open-source, decentralized tools that free you from relying on big tech.',
+    text_html:
+      'Build your app with open-source tools designed for a more decentralized environment free from reliance on big tech.',
   },
   three: {
     title: 'Economical',
     text_html:
-      'Add decentralized social to both new and existing applications in a scalable and economical way with batching and Capacity which make blockchain usage predictable and affordable.',
+      'Add decentralized social to both new and existing applications in a scalable and economical way with batching and Capacity making blockchain usage predictable.',
   },
   four: {
     title: 'Proven',

diff --git a/src/routes/docs/components/Explore.svelte b/src/routes/docs/components/Explore.svelte
@@ -34,14 +34,14 @@
 
       <div class="pb-f64 text-sm text-white md:pb-f80">
         Frequency offers simple blockchain integration for your applications&mdash;bridging the gap between your app and
-        the decentralized web. Frequency Gateway offers a suite of tools and services that make it easy to connect your
-        applications to the Frequency blockchain. This allows your development team to focus on building outstanding
-        user experiences without managing the complexity of blockchain interactions. With Gateway you can pick and
-        choose from to build the best applications for your users to:
+        the decentralized web. Frequency Developer Gateway offers a suite of self-hosted tools and services that make it
+        easy to connect your applications to Frequency. This allows your developer team to focus on building outstanding
+        user experiences without managing the complexity of blockchain interactions. With Frequency Developer Gateway,
+        you can pick and choose among the tools and services to build the best applications for your users to:
         <div class="pt-4 font-bold">
           <ul class="list-inside list-disc lg:pl-5">
-            <li>Add decentralized authentication and onboarding workflows</li>
-            <li>Connect your users with their universal social graph</li>
+            <li>Add authentication and onboarding workflows</li>
+            <li>Connect with their universal social graph</li>
             <li>Read, write, and interact with social media content</li>
           </ul>
         </div>
@@ -60,9 +60,9 @@
         url="https://docs.frequency.xyz/Guides/BecomeAProvider.html"
       >
         {#snippet sectionLabel()}Quick Start/<br />Become a Provider{/snippet}
-        In 5 minutes, you can become a provider, set up the Social App Template Example Application that uses Gateway Services.
-        This will give you a quick introduction to a working integration with Gateway Services and a starting place to explore
-        the possibilities.
+        In 5 minutes, you can become a provider and set up the Social App Template Example Application that uses Frequency
+        Developer Gateway Services. This will give you a quick introduction to a working integration with Frequency Developer
+        Gateway Services and a starting place to explore the possibilities.
       </HAccordion>
 
       <HAccordion
@@ -85,10 +85,11 @@
         url="https://docs.frequency.xyz/Guides/SSO.html"
       >
         {#snippet sectionLabel()}Add Single<br class="hidden lg:block" /> Sign-on to<br class="hidden lg:block" /> your App{/snippet}
-        SIWF provides comprehensive documentation and tools to integrate with Frequency Access, an easy-to-use single sign-on
-        identity solution for users on Frequency. SIWF simplifies the authentication process, allowing users to access the
-        entire Frequency ecosystem effortlessly while maintaining control over their personal data.</HAccordion
-      >
+        Sign On With Frequency (SIWF) provides comprehensive documentation and tools to integrate with Frequency Access,
+        an easy-to-use single sign-on identity solution for users on Frequency. SIWF simplifies the authentication process,
+        allowing users to access the entire Frequency ecosystem effortlessly while maintaining control over their personal
+        data.
+      </HAccordion>
 
       <HAccordion
         sectionNumber="4"
@@ -99,8 +100,9 @@
       >
         {#snippet sectionLabel()}Frequency<br class="hidden lg:block" /> Core{/snippet}
         Here you will find detailed information about the building blocks of Frequency including technical overviews, advanced
-        tutorials, API documentation, code samples and more&mdash;everything you need to build your first Frequency application.</HAccordion
-      >
+        tutorials, API documentation, code samples and more–everything you need to build your first application to leverage
+        the power of Frequency.
+      </HAccordion>
     </div>
   </div>
 </div>