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 # fromdemand-to-law.github.io
-A roadmap of the initiative petition process to inspires and help folks get started on their own proposals of law.
+A roadmap of the initiative petition process to inspire and help folks get started on their own proposals of law.
 ## Project Overview
+Hello and welcome!
+Democracy thrives on active civic participation, and one of the most direct ways for citizens to make an impact is through initiative petitions. However, navigating the initiative petition process can be daunting, with varied rules, deadlines, and requirements across different regions. That's where our tool steps in!
 
+## Purpose
 Design a tool for the general public to learn about the initiative petition process, and for advocacy groups to use a roadmap to start their own petition efforts.
+This tool aims to demystify the initiative petition process by providing:
+- Step-by-step guidance tailored for beginners.
+- Consolidated resources and information.
+- Planning tools to streamline the process and avoid common pitfalls.
+
+## Why this tool matters?
+Empowerment: Equips users with the knowledge to engage in direct democracy.
+Accessibility: Brings clarity to a traditionally complex process.
+Inclusivity: Designed for everyone, from seasoned activists to first-time participants.
 
 ## Design Process
 
 ### Research
 
 Consolidating information from: 
-- Mass.gov
+- https://www.mass.gov/filing-initiative-petitions
 - https://malegislature.gov/Laws/Constitution#amendmentArticleXLVIII
 - https://www.sec.state.ma.us/divisions/elections/download/getting-on-the-ballot/State-Ballot-Question-Petitions.pdf
 
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 ### Tools Used
 
 - Figma