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Solution #4867
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Your implementation of calculateRentalCost
is on the right track, but there are a few critical improvements needed to fully meet the task requirements. 🚀
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Use Constants for Magic Numbers: Replace literals like
40
,20
, and50
with named constants to make your code more readable and maintainable. -
Use
const
Instead oflet
: SincetotalAmount
is not reassigned, it should be declared withconst
to reflect its immutability. -
Simplify Conditional Logic: Consider using
if
statements withreturn
to simplify your conditional logic and improve code clarity.
These changes will enhance the quality and maintainability of your code. Keep up the great work, and I'm confident you'll nail it with these adjustments! 💪
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Review Summary
Great job on implementing the calculateRentalCost
function! 🎉 Your code meets the task requirements and constraints effectively. Here are a few points to consider for improvement:
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Descriptive Variable Names: The variables
znyzhka
andvznyzhka
are not descriptive for English-speaking developers. Renaming them tosmallDiscount
andlargeDiscount
would enhance readability and maintainability. -
Use of Constants: Excellent use of constants for the discount values, which helps avoid hardcoding literals in expressions.
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Conditional Structure: While your use of
else if
statements is correct, consider usingif
withreturn
to simplify conditions. This is a stylistic preference and not a strict requirement.
Overall, your code functions correctly according to the task description. The decision to approve is made to help you move forward with your learning. Please review the comments to improve your code. Remember, addressing these issues will enhance your coding skills and help you avoid similar problems in the future. Keep up the great work and continue learning! 🚀
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const znyzhka = 20; | ||
const vznyzhka = 50; |
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The variable names znyzhka
and vznyzhka
are not descriptive in English. Consider renaming them to smallDiscount
and largeDiscount
for better readability.
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