Solution #1298
Solution #1298
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Great job on your code! 🎉 There are a few areas that could be improved for efficiency and cleanliness, but these are minor issues and do not impact the core functionality of your code. Keep up the good work and consider the provided feedback for your future coding tasks. Happy coding! 😊
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| class Carnivore(Animal): | ||
| @classmethod | ||
| def bite(cls, herbivore: Animal) -> None: |
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Code Efficiency: You should use the class name to get access to the class attributes. In this case, instead of cls.alive.remove(herbivore), you should use Animal.alive.remove(herbivore). Refer to point 1 in the checklist.
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| class Herbivore(Animal): | ||
| def hide(self) -> None: | ||
| self.hidden = not self.hidden |
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Code Efficiency: You can change the bool value in one line without using an if statement. In this case, you should use self.hidden = not self.hidden. Refer to point 2 in the checklist.
| def bite(cls, herbivore: Animal) -> None: | ||
| if isinstance(herbivore, Herbivore) and not herbivore.hidden: | ||
| herbivore.health -= 50 | ||
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| if herbivore.health <= 0: | ||
| cls.alive.remove(herbivore) |
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Code Efficiency: This method could be a static method since it doesn't use any instance attributes. Refer to point 3 in the checklist.
| def __repr__(self) -> str: | ||
| return (f"{{Name: {self.name}, " | ||
| f"Health: {self.health}, " | ||
| f"Hidden: {self.hidden}}}") |
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Code Style: You should use interpolation instead of concatenation. In this case, instead of f"{{Name: {self.name}, ", you should use f"{{Name: {self.name}, ". Refer to point 3 in the checklist.
| def __init__(self, | ||
| name: str, | ||
| heals: int = 100, | ||
| hidden: bool = False) -> None: | ||
| self.name = name | ||
| self.health = heals | ||
| self.hidden = hidden |
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Code Style: You should use descriptive and correct variable names. In this case, instead of heals, you should use health. Refer to point 4 in the checklist.
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