Express tute - mongodb setup screens (#35206)

files/en-us/learn/server-side/express_nodejs/deployment/index.md

@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ It will look something like this:
 
 ```js
 const mongoDB =
-  "mongodb+srv://your_user_name:your_password@cluster0.lz91hw2.mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites=true&w=majority";
+  "mongodb+srv://your_user_name:your_password@cluster0.cojoign.mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites=true&w=majority";
 ```
 
 Replace the line with the following code that uses `process.env.MONGODB_URI` to get the connection string from an environment variable named `MONGODB_URI` if has been set (use your own database URL instead of the placeholder below).
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ const mongoose = require("mongoose");
 mongoose.set("strictQuery", false);
 
 const dev_db_url =
-  "mongodb+srv://your_user_name:your_password@cluster0.lz91hw2.mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites=true&w=majority";
+  "mongodb+srv://your_user_name:your_password@cluster0.cojoign.mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites=true&w=majority";
 const mongoDB = process.env.MONGODB_URI || dev_db_url;
 
 main().catch((err) => console.log(err));

files/en-us/learn/server-side/express_nodejs/mongoose/index.md

@@ -589,28 +589,37 @@ You will first need to [create an account](https://www.mongodb.com/cloud/atlas/r
 After logging in, you'll be taken to the [home](https://cloud.mongodb.com/v2) screen:
 
 1. Click the **+ Create** button in the _Overview_ section.
+
    ![Create a database on MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_createdatabase.jpg)
 
-2. This will open the _Deploy your database_ screen. Click on the **M0 FREE** option template.
+2. This will open the _Deploy your cluster_ screen.
+   Click on the **M0 FREE** option template.
+
    ![Choose a deployment option when using MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_deploy.jpg)
 
 3. Scroll down the page to see the different options you can choose.
    ![Choose a cloud provider when using MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_createsharedcluster.jpg)
 
+   - You can change the name of your Cluster under _Cluster Name_.
+     We are keeping it as `Cluster0` for this tutorial.
+   - Deselect the _Preload sample dataset_ checkbox, as we'll import our own sample data later on
    - Select any provider and region from the _Provider_ and _Region_ sections. Different regions offer different providers.
-   - You can change the name of your Cluster under _Cluster Name_. We are naming it `Cluster0` for this tutorial.
    - Tags are optional. We will not use them here.
-   - Click the **Create** button (creation of the cluster will take some minutes).
+   - Click the **Create deployment** button (creation of the cluster will take some minutes).
 
 4. This will open the _Security Quickstart_ section.
    ![Set up the Access Rules on the Security Quickstart screen on MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_securityquickstart.jpg)
 
-   - Enter a username and password. Remember to copy and store the credentials safely as we will need them later on. Click the **Create User** button.
+   - Enter a username and password for your application to use to access the database (above we have created a new login "cooluser").
+     Remember to copy and store the credentials safely as we will need them later on.
+     Click the **Create User** button.
 
      > [!NOTE]
      > Avoid using special characters in your MongoDB user password as mongoose may not parse the connection string properly.
 
-   - Enter `0.0.0.0/0` in the IP Address field. This tells MongoDB that we want to allow access from anywhere. Click the **Add Entry** button.
+   - Select **Add by current IP address** to allow access from your current computer
+   - Enter `0.0.0.0/0` in the IP Address field and then click the **Add Entry** button.
+     This tells MongoDB that we want to allow access from anywhere.
 
      > [!NOTE]
      > It is a best practice to limit the IP addresses that can connect to your database and other resources. Here we allow a connection from anywhere because we don't know where the request will come from after deployment.
@@ -640,25 +649,24 @@ After logging in, you'll be taken to the [home](https://cloud.mongodb.com/v2) sc
    - Click the _Overview_ tab to return to the cluster overview.
 
 10. From the Cluster0 _Overview_ screen click the **Connect** button.
+
     ![Configure connection after setting up a cluster in MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_connectbutton.jpg)
 
-11. This will open the _Connect to Cluster_ screen.
-    Click the **Drivers** option under the _Connect to your application_ section.
-    ![Choose a connection type when connecting with MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_chooseaconnectionmethod.jpg)
+11. This will open the _Connect to Cluster0_ screen.
 
-12. You will now be shown the _Connect_ screen.
     ![Choose the Short SRV connection when setting up a connection on MongoDB Atlas.](mongodb_atlas_-_connectforshortsrv.jpg)
 
-    - Select the Node driver and version as shown.
-    - **DO NOT** follow the step 2.
+    - Select your database user.
+    - Select the _Drivers_ category, then the _Driver_ **Node.js** and _Version_ as shown.
+    - **DO NOT** install the driver as suggested.
     - Click the **Copy** icon to copy the connection string.
     - Paste this in your local text editor.
-    - Update the username and password with your user's password.
+    - Replace `<password>` placeholder in the connection string with your user's password.
     - Insert the database name "local_library" in the path before the options (`...mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites...`)
     - Save the file containing this string somewhere safe.
 
 You have now created the database, and have a URL (with username and password) that can be used to access it.
-This will look something like: `mongodb+srv://your_user_name:your_password@cluster0.lz91hw2.mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites=true&w=majority`
+This will look something like: `mongodb+srv://your_user_name:your_password@cluster0.cojoign.mongodb.net/local_library?retryWrites=true&w=majority&appName=Cluster0`
 
 ## Install Mongoose
 
@@ -826,7 +834,7 @@ The new things we show here are the field options:
 
 Everything else should be familiar from our previous schema.
 
-### Genre model - challenge!
+### Genre model - challenge
 
 Open your **./models/genre.js** file and create a schema for storing genres (the category of book, e.g. whether it is fiction or non-fiction, romance or military history, etc.).