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Fix: Glossary for Cloud #36026
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Fix: Glossary for Cloud #36026
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Hi there @ragul1697, and thank you for your contribution to MDN! I've provided you with a few comments to consider, although I think this is largely going in the right direction.
Thanks for all the comments. I will make the changes soon and let you know. |
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I think another good addition would be to include different cloud deployment style (e.g. Private Cloud, Public Cloud, etc.) as mentioned in the NIST Definition of Cloud Computing. Also including the document itself could be a good source for additional reading. |
Hi @chrisdavidmills, I have made some changes for the Glossary item on Cloud Computing. Pease have a look at it. Thanks |
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@ragul1697 great work., thank you so much. This content is interesting and useful. I've provided a bunch of comments, but most of them are fairly minor grammar/consistency updates.
The only really major one is the last one; I really don't think you need the last section.
Hi @chrisdavidmills, completed all the changes requested. Thank you✌️ |
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Instead of storing data or running programs on a local computer or server, users can access cloud resources to perform tasks: this is known as {{glossary("Cloud computing")}}. | ||
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### Key features of the cloud |
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### Key features of the cloud | |
Key features of the cloud include: |
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This model enables faster innovation, flexible scalability, and significant cost savings. Users can use cloud-based services through a _pay-as-you-go_ pricing model, ensuring they only pay for what they use, making them highly efficient and adaptable solutions for businesses and individuals alike. | ||
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### Cloud Services |
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Try to remove as many of these headings as possible. Glossaries are short and don't need many subsections. Also pay attention that you must start from h2 and go down, not start from h3.
Description
Fixes #35519 - Added Glossary item for
Cloud
Additional details
Since MDN focuses on the web, it might be beneficial to include content about hosting web applications. Additionally, adding information about cloud services and cloud service providers could be valuable.