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W-17160340-Nav-changes-and-Anypoint-platform-intro-CP #580
W-17160340-Nav-changes-and-Anypoint-platform-intro-CP #580
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Co-authored-by: Kevin Troller <kevinmeinrad.troller@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Kevin Troller <kevinmeinrad.troller@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Kevin Troller <kevinmeinrad.troller@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Kevin Troller <kevinmeinrad.troller@mulesoft.com>
W-17006383-Address-Kevo-feedback-CP
Fix-typo-CP
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* xref:login-platform-from-studio.adoc[] | ||
** xref:set-credentials-in-studio-to.adoc[] | ||
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* xref:set-anypoint-platform-cloud.adoc[Set Anypoint Platform Cloud] |
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What does "set" mean in this case? Are you selecting it? Configuring Studio to deploy to it?
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Consider removing any hard-coded link text that's not different from the H1.
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I chose “set” as it is a “general” verb. This is an introduction to the deployment options that Studio offers. Is "Configure" a better option?
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** xref:eu-cloud-configuration.adoc[Configure EU Cloud in Studio] | ||
** xref:pce-configuration.adoc[Configure Private Cloud Edition in Studio] | ||
*** xref:pce3-configuration.adoc[Configure PCE 3 in Studio] | ||
**** xref:pce-configuration-macos.adoc[MacOS] |
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Make sure that the H1s are as unique as possible (I'm not sure what they are based on this link text).
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OK! Thanks!
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* xref:login-platform-from-studio.adoc[] | ||
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* xref:set-anypoint-platform-cloud.adoc[Set Anypoint Platform Cloud] | ||
** xref:deploy-mule-application-task.adoc[Deploy a Mule Application to CloudHub] | ||
** xref:domain-support-concept.adoc[Domain Support] |
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Could you add more context here? I'm not sure what the topic is about based on the title. What is the user value?
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I changed the title. Do you mean to add the value for the customer in the title?
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Yes. Domain Support doesn't tell me much about what's included in the topic. The user task seems to be "share global configurations between different Mule applications implementing the same domain"
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Yes! The user task you described is accurate but maybe too long.
What about?:
"Manage Mule Domains Through Global Elements and Configuration XML".
I can't think of a short and sweet title :/
Thanks!
** xref:deploy-mule-application-task.adoc[Deploy a Mule Application to CloudHub] | ||
** xref:domain-support-concept.adoc[Domain Support] | ||
*** xref:domain-studio-tasks.adoc[Design Mule Domains] | ||
** xref:eu-cloud-configuration.adoc[Configure EU Cloud in Studio] |
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This H1 is really different in the topic...
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I'm confused. Do you mean that the configuration of EU Cloud in Studio is really different from configuring Hyperforce or the Studio domains?
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I mean the hard-coded link text is really different than the H1 in the topic: "Access the EU Control Plane from Anypoint Studio"
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Yes! I'm trying to be consistent with the titles in the nav, at least.
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OK, but it might be confusing to have the source/destination so different.
Co-authored-by: Hanna Nelson <hanna.nelson@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Hanna Nelson <hanna.nelson@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Hanna Nelson <hanna.nelson@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Hanna Nelson <hanna.nelson@mulesoft.com>
Co-authored-by: Hanna Nelson <hanna.nelson@mulesoft.com>
W-17006383-Update-intro-CP
…udio-CP W-17006383-Add-Hyperforce-to-Studio-CP
W-17160340-Update-nav-CP
W-17160340-Update-title-CP
W-17160340-Update-title-CP
W-17160340-Update-nav-CP
W-17160340-Update-nav-CP
W-17160340-Remove-hard-coded-titles-CP
W-17160340-Update-nav-CP
W-17160340-Update-nav-CP
W-17160340-Fix-table-CP
Co-authored-by: Hanna Nelson <hanna.nelson@mulesoft.com>
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