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-# mantram
+# mantram 📿
 
-[mantram.blog](https://mantram.blog/) is a library/compilation of various Buddhist
-mantrams/suttas (真言).
+[mantram.blog](https://mantram.blog/) is a mobile-friendly library/compilation of
+various Buddhist mantrams/suttas (真言).
 
-I ([ndinata](https://github.com/ndinata)) built this site so that my family and friends have one central place on which to
-find all the mantrams they like to recite. This removes the issue where different
-mantrams reside across various books/pictures in the camera roll!
+I ([ndinata](https://github.com/ndinata)) built this site so that my family and
+friends have an easier time reciting mantrams on their phones. No more having to
+zoom in and out of blurry photos of book pages!
 
-You can find all the available mantrams as Markdown files in [src/content/posts](./src/content/posts/).
+All the mantrams are available as Markdown files in [src/content/posts](./src/content/posts/).
 
 For suggestions/corrections feel free to open an issue or email me :)
 
 ## tech stack
 
-The site is built with the lovely [Astro](https://astro.build) framework and (React + [shadcn](https://ui.shadcn.com)) UI components, and is deployed on GitHub Pages.
+The site is built with the lovely [Astro](https://astro.build) framework and React + [shadcn](https://ui.shadcn.com) UI components, and is deployed on GitHub Pages.
 
 To run it locally: