Clarify the notion of resolution

draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-04.xml → draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-05.xml

@@ -10,11 +10,11 @@
 
 <rfc xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" submissionType="independent"
 category="info" ipr="trust200902" xml:lang="en" version="3"
-docName="draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-04" >
+docName="draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-05" >
   <front>
     <title>The "doi" URI Scheme</title>
 
-    <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-04"
+    <seriesInfo name="Internet-Draft" value="draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-05"
     status="informational"/>
 
     <author initials='P.-A.' surname='Lemieux' fullname='Pierre-Anthony Lemieux' role="editor">
@@ -68,8 +68,9 @@ docName="draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-04" >
       <t>This document specifies a URI scheme for DOI names. This scheme
       conforms to the syntax specified at <xref target="RFC3986"/> and
       formalizes the notation "doi:&lt;DOI name&gt;", which is in widespread
-      use. When resolved, the URI corresponding to a DOI name yields the DOI
-      record associated with the name.</t>
+      use. When derefenced as detailed in <xref
+      target="sec-doi-name-resolution"/>, the URI corresponding to a DOI name
+      yields the DOI record associated with the name.</t>
 
       <t>EXAMPLE 2: "doi:10.1103/PhysRevLett.59.381" is the URI corresponding to
       the DOI name above.</t>
@@ -129,16 +130,16 @@ docName="draft-lemieux-doi-uri-scheme-04" >
       equivalence and only with respect to the Basic Latin Unicode block.</t>
     </section>
 
-    <section>
-      <name>Resolution</name>
+    <section anchor="sec-doi-name-resolution">
+      <name>DOI Name Resolution</name>
 
       <t>Resolving a DOI name means retrieving its DOI record, which contains
       the descriptive elements associated with the referent identified by the
       DOI name.</t>
 
-      <t>A DOI name URI can be be resolved by performing an HTTP GET request at
-      the following URL (expressed using ABNF syntax as defined at <xref
-      target="RFC5234"/>):</t>
+      <t>A DOI name URI can be used to resolve its corresponding DOI name by
+      performing an HTTP GET request at the following URL (expressed using ABNF
+      syntax as defined at <xref target="RFC5234"/>):</t>
 
       <t><tt>"https://doi.org/api/handles/" scheme-specific-part</tt></t>