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modules/ROOT/pages/release-notes.adoc

@@ -54,12 +54,12 @@ In this release we introduced several authentication mechanisms in different pro
 
 Improved Authorization:
 
-* The performance of the https://docs.stackable.tech/home/stable/hdfs/usage-guide/security.html#_authorization[OPA Authorizer] has been greatly improved. This _can_ be a breaking change so please make sure to read the https://github.com/stackabletech/hdfs-utils/releases/tag/v0.4.0[release notes] of the hdfs-utils for details
-* The User Info Fetcher HTTP API has been replaced with a Rego library, please see https://docs.stackable.tech/home/nightly/opa/usage-guide/user-info-fetcher#_user_info_fetcher_api for more information
+* The performance of the https://docs.stackable.tech/home/stable/hdfs/usage-guide/security.html#_authorization[OPA Authorizer] has been greatly improved. This _can_ be a breaking change so please make sure to read the hdfs-utils https://github.com/stackabletech/hdfs-utils/releases/tag/v0.4.0[release notes] for details.
+* The User Info Fetcher HTTP API has been replaced with a Rego library. Please see https://docs.stackable.tech/home/nightly/opa/usage-guide/user-info-fetcher#_user_info_fetcher_api for more information
 
 Monitoring:
 
-* In SDP 24.7 we upgraded the version of [JMX Exporter](https://github.com/prometheus/jmx_exporter) from 0.20 to 1.0.1. This is the tool which allows us to expose JMX as Prometheus metrics and is in use for Hadoop, HBase, Hive, Kafka, Spark, Trino and ZooKeeper. Unfortunately the version 1.0.1 has a severe performance degradation which has been [fixed upstream](https://github.com/prometheus/jmx_exporter/pull/1009) but is not released yet. This SDP release 24.11 contains a fixed version bringing performance back to normal levels.
+* In SDP 24.7 we upgraded the version of [JMX Exporter](https://github.com/prometheus/jmx_exporter) from 0.20 to 1.0.1. This is the tool which allows us to expose JMX metrics in Prometheus and is in use for Hadoop, HBase, Hive, Kafka, Spark, Trino and ZooKeeper. Unfortunately the version 1.0.1 has a severe performance degradation which has been [fixed upstream](https://github.com/prometheus/jmx_exporter/pull/1009) but is not yet released. This SDP release 24.11 contains a fixed version bringing performance back to normal levels.
 
 Security:
 
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ Listener:
 
 Misc:
 
-* Apache NiFi: allow users to configure allowed hosts when NiFi is running behind a proxy. The proxy host check is now turned off by default. Documentation: https://docs.stackable.tech/home/nightly/nifi/usage_guide/security#host-header-check
+* Apache NiFi: permit users to configure allowed hosts when NiFi is running behind a proxy. The proxy host check is now turned off by default. Documentation: https://docs.stackable.tech/home/nightly/nifi/usage_guide/security#host-header-check
 
 Bug fixes: