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Solution #1333

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Thank you for your hard work on this task! Your implementation is almost there, but there's a critical issue that needs to be addressed before we can approve the pull request. The hidden attribute should be an instance variable rather than a class variable to ensure each animal has its own hidden state. This change is essential for the correct functionality of your code. Once you make this adjustment, your solution will be much stronger. Keep up the great work, and I'm confident you'll nail it! 😊

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# write your code here
class Animal:
hidden = False

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The hidden attribute is defined as a class variable, but it should be an instance variable. Each animal instance should have its own hidden state, so it should be defined within the __init__ method.

# write your code here
class Animal:
hidden = False
alive = []

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The alive list is defined as a class variable, which is correct for tracking all instances. However, ensure that objects are properly removed from this list when they are no longer alive to prevent memory leaks or incorrect length calculations.


class Herbivore(Animal):
def hide(self) -> None:
self.hidden = not self.hidden

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The hidden attribute should be an instance variable, but it is currently a class variable. You should initialize self.hidden in the __init__ method of the Animal class.

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class Carnivore(Animal):
@classmethod
def bite(cls, goal: Animal) -> None:
if isinstance(goal, Herbivore) and not goal.hidden:
goal.health -= 50
goal.remove_if_dead()
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Why you need two Carnivore classes?
please remove one of them

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Several changes were requested



class Carnivore(Animal):
@classmethod

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There is no need to make this method as a classmethod since cls is not called. You could make it static in the current implementation


class Carnivore(Animal):
@classmethod
def bite(cls, goal: Animal) -> None:

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It is better to explicitly indicate that goal should be Herbivore class instance

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def __len__(self) -> int:
return len(Animal.alive)

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There is no need for __len__ here, remove it

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